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  1. Posted: April 24, 2012In: Public

    After an organic supercomputer goes haywire and hijacks all of the world?s computer systems, its scientist creator must stop the crazed machine before it kills him.

    Ilandes
    Added an answer on April 26, 2012 at 4:12 am

    I don't know if it's necessary to say 'scientist creator', since the creator is obviously the creator of the computer system... My own opinion if I was reading the back of a video though and trying to decide whether or not to get it, is if the world or some big disaster was at risk, not just the lifRead more

    I don’t know if it’s necessary to say ‘scientist creator’, since the creator is obviously the creator of the computer system…
    My own opinion if I was reading the back of a video though and trying to decide whether or not to get it, is if the world or some big disaster was at risk, not just the life of the person who created this mess ;). My two cents anyway but it does sound like an interesting premise.

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  2. Posted: April 13, 2012In: Public

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    Ilandes
    Added an answer on April 19, 2012 at 1:59 am

    Great concept and I love dystopian themes. Just one thing though - I'm not sure about "radical parental EXAMS". Is this a society that decides who becomes parents or not, or dicates HOW people parent? I think that is what should perhaps be clearer in the logline.

    Great concept and I love dystopian themes.
    Just one thing though – I’m not sure about “radical parental EXAMS”. Is this a society that decides who becomes parents or not, or dicates HOW people parent? I think that is what should perhaps be clearer in the logline.

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  3. Posted: April 15, 2012In: Public

    When a man's visions of a lover from a past life reveal she may also be alive today, his initial curiosity turns to an all-consuming obsession as he attempts to challenge fate to be with her once again.

    Ilandes
    Added an answer on April 19, 2012 at 1:53 am

    The premise reminds me a little of Dead Again with Emma Thompson, I guess because of the reincarnation theme. I agree with an above poster about the "attempt to challenge fate". It sounds more like he is trying to go up against what most of us conceive of as "reality" vs what might be simply a creatRead more

    The premise reminds me a little of Dead Again with Emma Thompson, I guess because of the reincarnation theme.

    I agree with an above poster about the “attempt to challenge fate”. It sounds more like he is trying to go up against what most of us conceive of as “reality” vs what might be simply a creation of one’s own mind.

    I came across a sad website once in the late 90s where a widower had visions of a woman and even designed a website dedicated to finding her. Had worked in photoshop to come up with an image of what she looked like even, along with her hobbies. Is it sort of along those lines?

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