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  1. Posted: August 11, 2021In: Thriller

    A wounded African American man seeking refuge from BLM riots appears at the door of a rich family. After taking him in, he appears on the news as wanted for murder and the family must decide if he was framed, or face the consequences of harboring a murderer.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on August 17, 2021 at 7:04 am

    Leaning towards: “A comfortable upper-class family must decide [ACTION/GOAL] when a wounded African American BLM protestor seeks refuge. Thinking aloud - the “wanted for murder” plot point is good ACT II fodder – when we (audience) have an investment into your premise and these characters. Keep goinRead more

    Leaning towards:
    “A comfortable upper-class family must decide [ACTION/GOAL] when a wounded African American BLM protestor seeks refuge.

    Thinking aloud – the “wanted for murder” plot point is good ACT II fodder – when we (audience) have an investment into your premise and these characters.

    Keep going!

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  2. Posted: August 8, 2021In: Action

    After receiving an email to partake in a heist experience, an intrepid engineering student and his friends must work out how to rob a casino; but when they discover the heist is real, they must find the creators and expose them before they’re caught.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on August 17, 2021 at 2:01 am

    Borrowing your 'heist experience' ;) "An intrepid engineering student must unravel a ‘heist experience’ email when discovering he inadvertently orchestrated a real casino robbery"

    Borrowing your ‘heist experience’ 😉

    “An intrepid engineering student must unravel a ‘heist experience’ email when discovering he inadvertently orchestrated a real casino robbery”

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  3. Posted: June 2, 2021In: SciFi

    Fear of monetary demise turns the globe into a top-security prison; Buddha senses implosion; looms with a pragmatic paragon to unzip recession and stress from deceptive human life; enlightens three lost children who endure from NASA plane crash in Vedic woods.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on June 3, 2021 at 1:37 am

    Interesting premise, consider the following: 1. I struggle with your major event - the fifth Buddha’s return / following these three youngsters. 2. Your world is great, but who is your baddie? 3. Concerning the three youngsters, is the fifth Buddha reborn through one of them? Example: “In a collapsiRead more

    Interesting premise, consider the following:
    1. I struggle with your major event – the fifth Buddha’s return / following these three youngsters.
    2. Your world is great, but who is your baddie?
    3. Concerning the three youngsters, is the fifth Buddha reborn through one of them?

    Example:
    “In a collapsing global police state, a reincarnate fifth Buddha sets out to restore nirvana to the world”

    I only have a basic understanding of Buddhism – maybe use my thoughts/questions as a good example of your typical reader.

    Keep going, take care.

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