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To save a retirement home from bankruptcy, its uptight director must convince her estranged, obnoxious father to make a significant donation, or face losing her job and custody of her daughter. But when he insists on playing a role in running the home, the director must balance the need to keep her father’s money with the increasing annoyance of the home’s residents with the coarse intruder.
Leaning towards: “An uptight director's cash-strapped retirement home is turned topsy-turvy when accepting a bailout from her estranged father and his ensuing meddling sparks an old-folks revolt” Make this yours, take care.
Leaning towards:
“An uptight director’s cash-strapped retirement home is turned topsy-turvy when accepting a bailout from her estranged father and his ensuing meddling sparks an old-folks revolt”
Make this yours, take care.
See lessAfter losing her best friend in an abandoned building, a girl will have to find a way out before an old man forces her to face her greatest fear.
Consider the following to strengthen your logline: 1. Why were they in this build? E.g., Urban explorers shooting their latest abandoned vid. 2. What’s the psychology of your protag? E.g., Claustrophobic, afraid of the dark, reckless? 3. Who is this old man? A “get off of my lawn” derelict? 4. WhatRead more
Consider the following to strengthen your logline:
1. Why were they in this build? E.g., Urban explorers shooting their latest abandoned vid.
2. What’s the psychology of your protag? E.g., Claustrophobic, afraid of the dark, reckless?
3. Who is this old man? A “get off of my lawn” derelict?
4. What does “forces her to face her greatest fear” look like?
Take care.
See lessAn uninventive children’s author, whose supposed dreams have long been documented in his bedside journal by a mysterious ghostwriter, wakes up to a shockingly blank journal upon the release of his debut novel.
Fascinating premise. In this version, you can use the “OMG the journal is blank/gone” as an ACT II plot twist. Leaning towards: “An uninventive child author sourcing stories from a mystical self-writing dream journal sets out to clear his name when his debut novel is accused of plagiarism.” Make thiRead more
Fascinating premise. In this version, you can use the “OMG the journal is blank/gone” as an ACT II plot twist.
Leaning towards:
“An uninventive child author sourcing stories from a mystical self-writing dream journal sets out to clear his name when his debut novel is accused of plagiarism.”
Make this yours, take care
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