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Three characters, three life stories, integrate as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to imprison a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah. — WHOLE
A better version, thinking out loud – what about: 1. Switching "Tales" with "Alter egos ..." 2. Playing on alter egos, instead of “discover” what about uncover? To uncover is to reveal. 3. Switching “imprison” with lock-up – this word is more associated with emotions e.g., the negative emotion thatRead more
A better version, thinking out loud – what about:
1. Switching “Tales” with “Alter egos …”
2. Playing on alter egos, instead of “discover” what about uncover? To uncover is to reveal.
3. Switching “imprison” with lock-up – this word is more associated with emotions e.g., the negative emotion that created the “killer” alter ego.
“Alter egos intertwine as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to uncover and lock up a serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah”.
BTW: You owe Richiev and me a beer 😉
See lessAn ex-soldier far from home gets stuck up in a huge set up targeting his employer. proving his innocence by fighting a general of the army and a controverse businessman behind all of this, is all he can do to save his live.
Cool, leaning towards: "A far from home veteran seeks revenge on a warlord after a deadly setup - targeting his employer" Take care.
Cool, leaning towards:
“A far from home veteran seeks revenge on a warlord after a deadly setup – targeting his employer”
Take care.
See lessAfter stealing a mysterious present on Christmas Eve, a selfish little boy must repent or be devoured by a monstrous elf.
Dig it. Hard to envision this “mysterious present” so I drift in and out of the Family genre. Up the clarity on this present, we need to start hating on this selfish boy immediately e.g. Santa’s gift for his orphanage or Santa’s special gift for his disabled brother kind of thang. Whatever you go wiRead more
Dig it.
Hard to envision this “mysterious present” so I drift in and out of the Family genre. Up the clarity on this present, we need to start hating on this selfish boy immediately e.g. Santa’s gift for his orphanage or Santa’s special gift for his disabled brother kind of thang. Whatever you go with tie your monstrous elf directly to it – I want to know this demon is the guardian of X and is hungry!
Keep it up! Take care.
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