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A meek middle-aged clerk has to escape a violent interrogation by a determined CIA agent who identifies him as the nation’s number one terrorist menace.
Cool, but what happens after the mild-mannered clerk lawyer’s up during a bad cop interrogation? This is a great inciting incident, but I am unable to see Act II or III. Keep going, take care.
Cool, but what happens after the mild-mannered clerk lawyer’s up during a bad cop interrogation? This is a great inciting incident, but I am unable to see Act II or III.
Keep going, take care.
See lessWhen a mistress learns her lover has died and his death erroneously ruled a suicide, she must untangle the true cause of his death.
Great points from Avakas. To help with the stakes what if her lover was prominent, and where is the wife? In the logline's current form there is nothing to keep the mistress from saying “check, please”, you need a life-or-death reason why she would pursue the truth. Example: A cheating politician isRead more
Great points from Avakas.
To help with the stakes what if her lover was prominent, and where is the wife?
In the logline’s current form there is nothing to keep the mistress from saying “check, please”, you need a life-or-death reason why she would pursue the truth.
Example: A cheating politician is murdered by his wife – ruled a suicide and the mistress is NEXT, thus she is compelled to solve the true crime.
Check out the 1998 movie “A Perfect Murder” as research; based on Alfred Hitchcock’s “Dial M for Murder”.
Take care.
See lessWhen he killed himself, he left five letters to five people in his life giving each a special task which he believed would bring them happiness. These are their stories.
BTW: Add 1984's "Amadeus" to your research.
BTW: Add 1984’s “Amadeus” to your research.
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