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  1. Posted: December 7, 2020In: Drama

    When he killed himself, he left five letters to five people in his life giving each a special task which he believed would bring them happiness. These are their stories.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 8, 2020 at 3:03 am

    "The lives of five hardened people are transformed when a quest for happiness letter arrives from a ghost of the past" Struggling with whom to spotlight, the ethos told me to envision this dead man narrating their journey, so I went with that 😉 Take care, Mike.

    “The lives of five hardened people are transformed when a quest for happiness letter arrives from a ghost of the past”

    Struggling with whom to spotlight, the ethos told me to envision this dead man narrating their journey, so I went with that 😉

    Take care, Mike.

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  2. Posted: December 6, 2020In: Comedy

    In a world where men carry at least one trimester of pregnancy, an anxious mother takes drastic steps including breaking laws to ensure that when it’s her accident-prone husband’s turn, the baby survives the experience.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on December 8, 2020 at 2:29 am

    Ah, cool, then I believe you’re looking for something like this: “In a world where men carry the final trimester of the pregnancy, an anxious mother must…” Ask yourself, is my story what must she do to ensure her accident-prone husband delivers the baby? To help, write down all the funny scenarios wRead more

    Ah, cool, then I believe you’re looking for something like this:
    “In a world where men carry the final trimester of the pregnancy, an anxious mother must…”
    Ask yourself, is my story what must she do to ensure her accident-prone husband delivers the baby? To help, write down all the funny scenarios where she has to intervene and compile them into one word or a small phrase.
    Your getting closer, remember this is a visual medium, don’t add stuff like “she must do whatever it takes or perform miracles” as the reader cannot envision. Take your time on this, it’s got to make sense and be fun to make this a knockout.
    BTW: This got a laugh out of my wife, good stuff.

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  3. Posted: December 6, 2020In: Comedy

    In a world where men carry at least one trimester of pregnancy, an anxious mother takes drastic steps including breaking laws to ensure that when it’s her accident-prone husband’s turn, the baby survives the experience.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on December 7, 2020 at 4:51 am

    Being that most (non-Jerry Springer featured) pregnancies are a shared experience 😉, I struggle with your premise. I get this is a role reversal, but that will not alter our current reality of females and males acting within their capacity during pregnancy. OPINION: Now, if this were a gender reversRead more

    Being that most (non-Jerry Springer featured) pregnancies are a shared experience 😉, I struggle with your premise. I get this is a role reversal, but that will not alter our current reality of females and males acting within their capacity during pregnancy.

    OPINION: Now, if this were a gender reversal like 1994’s movie “Junior” where the man has the baby, but with females as the dominant species e.g., Charlize Theron playing the husband – I’d watch it.

    Take care

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