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A driven mum must rise above her own insecurities to prove her inter-racially adopted daughter loves her.
To help with the hero’s desire, jot down what the viewer will be watching for the majority of your film, then find that relevant inciting incident to get your logline’s bearings. For instance, I had no clue this involved a troubled teen, I was on the - mother raising an adopted interracial younglingRead more
To help with the hero’s desire, jot down what the viewer will be watching for the majority of your film, then find that relevant inciting incident to get your logline’s bearings.
See lessFor instance, I had no clue this involved a troubled teen, I was on the – mother raising an adopted interracial youngling timeline.
Based on your feedback, one angle for this mother is to overcome a toxic upbringing to be a role-model for this teen. You could use Mike’s mentioned road trip if you have not already established your story beats.
Keep going, take care.
When a mistress learns her lover has died and his death erroneously ruled a suicide, she must untangle the true cause of his death.
This is what I can see, make this yours. “A former detective must unravel the true-crime when the spouse of her dead lover seeks revenge”
This is what I can see, make this yours.
See less“A former detective must unravel the true-crime when the spouse of her dead lover seeks revenge”
A meek middle-aged clerk has to escape a violent interrogation by a determined CIA agent who identifies him as the nation’s number one terrorist menace.
I have not seen The Guilty but based on IMDB / Rotten Tomatoes the logline probably looked something like “When getting disconnected from a kidnapping call, an alarm dispatcher and former police officer must use his skills to rescue the woman and apprehend her kidnapper before it’s too late” ConcernRead more
I have not seen The Guilty but based on IMDB / Rotten Tomatoes the logline probably looked something like “When getting disconnected from a kidnapping call, an alarm dispatcher and former police officer must use his skills to rescue the woman and apprehend her kidnapper before it’s too late”
Concerning your question about your challenge, just start with your story’s premise – then build from there. See Examples (top menu) to help construct – the goal is to get your logline in a state where the community can help.
Take care.
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