1. Posted: November 4, 2020In:

    To validate her self-worth, a cunning catfisher help victims reclaim their digital lives by revealing the truth and exposing the perpetrators.

    Odie Samurai

    Gives me a “Catch Me If You Can / My Name Is Earl” mashup vibe. I had to re-read the logline to determine your intent of a “catfisher” since this term has many connotations now. Also, isn’t catfishing or a catfisher a type of perpetrator? Variable had a good point about the “Now” question. What if yRead more

    Gives me a “Catch Me If You Can / My Name Is Earl” mashup vibe.
    I had to re-read the logline to determine your intent of a “catfisher” since this term has many connotations now. Also, isn’t catfishing or a catfisher a type of perpetrator?
    Variable had a good point about the “Now” question. What if your master identity thief 😊 narrowly escapes a relentless FBI agent and NOW is on-the-run undoing her “stolen identity list” before getting captured?

    Take care.

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  2. Posted: October 30, 2020In:

    A trio of college students discovers street racing becoming deadly when they discover a racer was a serial killer.

    Odie Samurai

    What if this group was "A trio of gear-head college students..." to help with focus? In your story - what is making this deadly? What are the stakes if they lose? Also, would help if you had a big bad rival. Take care.

    What if this group was “A trio of gear-head college students…” to help with focus? In your story – what is making this deadly? What are the stakes if they lose? Also, would help if you had a big bad rival.

    Take care.

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  3. Posted: October 25, 2020In:

    After being disowned by her friends, a high school student becomes a narcotics investigator to get revenge on a clique of stoner girls after a fellow classmate died of an overdose.

    Odie Samurai

    I missed this was a comedy. Fix the fact gap that your protag cannot be a high schooler and a police officer. Since this is a comedy she can use some absurd way to get revenge on this clique. Thinking out loud - what could happen when a jilted member of a pothead clique seeks revenge via the law inRead more

    I missed this was a comedy. Fix the fact gap that your protag cannot be a high schooler and a police officer. Since this is a comedy she can use some absurd way to get revenge on this clique.

    Thinking out loud – what could happen when a jilted member of a pothead clique seeks revenge via the law in a legalized recreational mary jane state?

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