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  1. Posted: November 12, 2020In: Fantasy

    When an adventurous village boy is sought-after by a giant for tricking his dragon friend, he must venture into the unknown to stop the giant’s plans to destroy the village.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 13, 2020 at 5:56 am

    Good points from Mike. What if the boy hides what he did. Think about it, no townsfolk deliberating over him, no parent having to defend or cave, only the dragon knows which is a ticking timebomb, most important - your protag decides to set out on his adventure to make it right. A giant with a pet dRead more

    Good points from Mike.
    What if the boy hides what he did. Think about it, no townsfolk deliberating over him, no parent having to defend or cave, only the dragon knows which is a ticking timebomb, most important – your protag decides to set out on his adventure to make it right.

    A giant with a pet dragon sounds interesting, take care.

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  2. Posted: November 13, 2020In: Drama

    A hardheaded businesswoman must convince an eccentric maker of wind chimes to sell his land if she hopes to complete her most ambitious real estate development and avoid bankruptcy

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 13, 2020 at 5:22 am

    Could be tightened if you're open: 1. Focus her profession to save on logline real estate. 2. Up the ante with LOVE 😍 Leaning towards: “A real estate mogul has one week to convince a handsome but eccentric maker of wind chimes to sell in order to avoid bankruptcy” Take care.

    Could be tightened if you’re open:
    1. Focus her profession to save on logline real estate.
    2. Up the ante with LOVE 😍
    Leaning towards:
    “A real estate mogul has one week to convince a handsome but eccentric maker of wind chimes to sell in order to avoid bankruptcy”

    Take care.

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  3. Posted: November 10, 2020In: Family

    A screen-obsessed 11-year-old gets trapped inside the dusty book left to him by his Grandfather where he must learn to visualise the fairytale world around him, play through the story, and imagine his way to the very last page.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on November 10, 2020 at 10:24 am

    This. Bastian from The NeverEnding Story wants a 2020 do-over!

    This. Bastian from The NeverEnding Story wants a 2020 do-over!

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