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A ten year-old hearing and speech-impaired boy evolves from prey to predator in a battle against a group of masked killers savaging homeowners on Halloween.
I like this, the logline could be tightened up though. Also, for the logline, ensure the killer's focus is ON this boy’s house – not the ambiguous people on his block. Leaning towards: “A deaf-mute boy must evolve from prey to predator when a group of masked killers invades his home on Halloween” HoRead more
I like this, the logline could be tightened up though. Also, for the logline, ensure the killer’s focus is ON this boy’s house – not the ambiguous people on his block.
Leaning towards:
“A deaf-mute boy must evolve from prey to predator when a group of masked killers invades his home on Halloween”
Hope this helps, take care.
See lessAfter stealing a mysterious present on Christmas Eve, a selfish little boy must repent or be devoured by a monstrous elf.
Dig it. Hard to envision this “mysterious present” so I drift in and out of the Family genre. Up the clarity on this present, we need to start hating on this selfish boy immediately e.g. Santa’s gift for his orphanage or Santa’s special gift for his disabled brother kind of thang. Whatever you go wiRead more
Dig it.
Hard to envision this “mysterious present” so I drift in and out of the Family genre. Up the clarity on this present, we need to start hating on this selfish boy immediately e.g. Santa’s gift for his orphanage or Santa’s special gift for his disabled brother kind of thang. Whatever you go with tie your monstrous elf directly to it – I want to know this demon is the guardian of X and is hungry!
Keep it up! Take care.
See lessTo validate her self-worth, a cunning catfisher help victims reclaim their digital lives by revealing the truth and exposing the perpetrators.
That's the word I was looking yesterday "reformed"!
That’s the word I was looking yesterday “reformed”!
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