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When a Wiccan radio host chooses to cast a spell to assist a desperate listener, things go horrifyingly wrong, as she unleashes something far more sinister and thus loses the listener in the process. Then she must find a way to get the listener back, the only way being an action that would put her own life in danger.
Another angle: “A late-night Wiccan radio host sets out to rescue [a recently dumped] listener when her [retribution] spell unleashes something much more sinister.” As a reader, the phrase “something far/much more sinister” is considered a teaser. Loglines are supposed to tell. Thus, I would rewriteRead more
Another angle:
“A late-night Wiccan radio host sets out to rescue [a recently dumped] listener when her [retribution] spell unleashes something much more sinister.”
As a reader, the phrase “something far/much more sinister” is considered a teaser. Loglines are supposed to tell. Thus, I would rewrite to inject the sinister stakes to help the premise.
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Curious, is the young woman’s father the retiring police chief, and she (daughter) is picking up his cold case?
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