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A washed-up musician enlists the help of Elvis Presley to save the planet Earth when the time space continuum becomes inverted by a vindictive inventor in a Las Vegas wax museum.
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See lessA washed-up musician enlists the help of Elvis Presley to save the planet Earth when the time space continuum becomes inverted by a vindictive inventor in a Las Vegas wax museum.
“A washed-up musician enlists the help of Elvis Presley to save the world when an evil mastermind turns the space-time continuum topsy-turvy in a Las Vegas wax museum.” OR “In a run-down Las Vegas wax museum, a washed-up musician enlists the help of Elvis Presley to save Sin City from …” OR Baddie’sRead more
“A washed-up musician enlists the help of Elvis Presley to save the world when an evil mastermind turns the space-time continuum topsy-turvy in a Las Vegas wax museum.”
OR
“In a run-down Las Vegas wax museum, a washed-up musician enlists the help of Elvis Presley to save Sin City from …”
OR
Baddie’s goal: “… when an evil mastermind awakens history’s worst villains …”
This is your story. Dig it, keep going!
Richiev, thoughts?
See lessWith the help of Elvis, a fourteen-year-old strrives to contain a series of disastrous events which he set in motion while working at his uncle’s run-down wax museum in Las Vegas.
There’s something to this. How would you describe the teen’s character or job function? Show, don’t tell the goal – “strives to contain a series of disastrous events, which he set in motion.” It sounds like Elvis and the teen are putting out fires. Is there an antagonist? For color, inject the stakeRead more
There’s something to this.
How would you describe the teen’s character or job function?
Show, don’t tell the goal – “strives to contain a series of disastrous events, which he set in motion.”
It sounds like Elvis and the teen are putting out fires. Is there an antagonist?
For color, inject the stakes into your goal.
Example:
See less“A teen tour guide enlists the help of Elvis to [GOAL] when hired by a run-down Las Vegas wax museum.”
Notice I excluded “while working” as that begs the reader, “why now?”
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