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BRIGHT ORANGE BALL – POV Ball. After one of the best soccer players in the world passes over his first soccer ball must convince the legend’s grandson to take up soccer.
Would I buy a book for my youngling based on your premise? Sure! But per your logline, the soccer player is the main character, not the ball. Who has to convince the grandson to play, the legend or the ball? Why does the grandson have to be persuaded - what are the stakes? For logline structure reseRead more
Would I buy a book for my youngling based on your premise? Sure! But per your logline, the soccer player is the main character, not the ball. Who has to convince the grandson to play, the legend or the ball? Why does the grandson have to be persuaded – what are the stakes?
For logline structure research, lookup movies like The Brave Little Toaster. That bright orange ball is your hook, and I can envision a bridge to becoming something better for both the ball and the player. Keep going! I hope you find this constructive.
See lessA doubtful artist and a stagnant fashion designer confront their own shortcomings when that spark an unlikely friendship
I wouldn’t consider the duo an unlikely friendship, both being creatives. From your title, you’ve covered the melancholy. Where is the road to passion, aka goal? Keep going.
I wouldn’t consider the duo an unlikely friendship, both being creatives. From your title, you’ve covered the melancholy. Where is the road to passion, aka goal?
Keep going.
See lessWhen he notices that the camera-man on set is an alien planning on taking over the world, the percipient lead actor must convince the rest of the crew to save the planet.
Dig it, leaning towards: “An indie film star and his reluctant crew must save humanity when an out-of-this-world cameraman attempts to steal the show – and the planet.” Make this yours, take care.
Dig it, leaning towards:
“An indie film star and his reluctant crew must save humanity when an out-of-this-world cameraman attempts to steal the show – and the planet.”
Make this yours, take care.
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