Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
BRIGHT ORANGE BALL – POV Ball. After one of the best soccer players in the world passes over his first soccer ball must convince the legend’s grandson to take up soccer.
You’re getting there. Think about the age group you’re trying to target. Thus, you may want to rethink the usage of banishing, loneliness, and death in your logline. Kiddo example: “A bright orange soccer ball sets off on new adventures with the grandson of a legendary footballer.” For color: You coRead more
You’re getting there.
Think about the age group you’re trying to target. Thus, you may want to rethink the usage of banishing, loneliness, and death in your logline.
Kiddo example:
“A bright orange soccer ball sets off on new adventures with the grandson of a legendary footballer.”
For color:
You could restructure to include “boy” instead of a grandson to appeal to a larger audience.
Show don’t tell “new adventures” to peak reader interest by injecting the destination GOAL of their journey together.
I wish you Godspeed on your journey to capture the best logline for your project.
See lessTwo star-crossed lovers, one a wizard, and one a witch, fight to stay together while both of their families engage in a neverending war.
Another angle: "Two star-crossed members of feuding witchcraft and wizardry families fall into a forbidden love."
Another angle:
See less“Two star-crossed members of feuding witchcraft and wizardry families fall into a forbidden love.”
After receiving divorce papers from his wife, a middle-aged man struggling with bipolar disorder turns up at his partner’s house to fix their relationship; but when emotions escalate and the police show up, he realises what’s truly jeopardizing his family.
Silver Linings Playbook?
Silver Linings Playbook?
See less