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A small-town news anchor accidentally uncovers a deadly bombshell secret on live TV, forcing her to find the truth that will save the town.
Consider the following: What is the deadly bombshell she’s reporting on? This will shed light on her truth/hero’s journey to save her beloved town. The rule of “Show, don’t tell” applies here, as I cannot envision what your “secret” will look like on-screen. FYI: this gives me an Erin Brockovich vibRead more
Consider the following:
What is the deadly bombshell she’s reporting on? This will shed light on her truth/hero’s journey to save her beloved town. The rule of “Show, don’t tell” applies here, as I cannot envision what your “secret” will look like on-screen.
FYI: this gives me an Erin Brockovich vibe, I’m probably way off, but this will give you an idea of what a reader may deduce from your current logline.
Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
See lessLeaving a trail of bodies in his wake, a vengeful college student must kill the men who murdered his parents while dealing with a determined government agent who will stop at nothing to catch him.
For color: Are the “men” classmates? What was the motive for killing his parents? Can the agent be a local sheriff or an FBI agent? Hook fuel - local authorities handle murder, so what’s behind the use of “must”? Anything interesting about how he avenges the death of his parents? Keep going!
For color:
Are the “men” classmates?
What was the motive for killing his parents?
Can the agent be a local sheriff or an FBI agent?
Hook fuel – local authorities handle murder, so what’s behind the use of “must”? Anything interesting about how he avenges the death of his parents?
Keep going!
See lessIn the year 2112, Tom Sawyer discovers a guitar, forbidden by The Priests of Syrinx. Embracing The Spirit of Radio, Tom wants to express his Freewill through music. Forced to Fly By Night, he uncovers a secret Closer to the Heart that threatens the governing technocracy.
There’s a song called “Home by the Sea” by the band Genesis – Google it or listen to its ghostly lyrics. So, I had this great idea of making a horror short with the same song name based on its premise. A buddy of mine who’s an independent filmmaker mentioned “Yea, you can’t do that without some sortRead more
There’s a song called “Home by the Sea” by the band Genesis – Google it or listen to its ghostly lyrics. So, I had this great idea of making a horror short with the same song name based on its premise. A buddy of mine who’s an independent filmmaker mentioned “Yea, you can’t do that without some sort of permission” Long story short, after weeks of legalese rabbit holes as a noob, I figured the best bet was to hire council.
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