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  1. Posted: November 1, 2021In: Coming of Age

    A coming-of-age lover dies at the hands of his new lover’s adversary but finds a way to come back for one hour each day if she will have him; otherwise, he’ll remain trapped in a dark world for the duration of her life.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 4, 2021 at 11:38 pm

    What does he do when he comes back? Creep on her? Is he extorted into doing her bidding? Also, If he can come back, can he figure out how to make it permanent as a goal?

    What does he do when he comes back? Creep on her? Is he extorted into doing her bidding?
    Also, If he can come back, can he figure out how to make it permanent as a goal?

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  2. Posted: November 1, 2021In: Drama

    Ante la enfermedad mental que sufre su madre, Carlos debe aceptar frecuentes cambios en su identidad para conocerla mejor y cuidar de ella.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 2, 2021 at 7:33 am

    Translation via Google: Faced with the mental illness suffered by his mother, Carlos must accept frequent changes in his identity to get to know her better and take care of her. Consider the following: State Alzheimer as the disease. Reader rule: don’t mention character names in a logline if they’reRead more

    Translation via Google:
    Faced with the mental illness suffered by his mother, Carlos must accept frequent changes in his identity to get to know her better and take care of her.

    Consider the following:
    State Alzheimer as the disease.
    Reader rule: don’t mention character names in a logline if they’re not a real person e.g., Cleopatra.
    Is Carlos hiding from a storied past? When mom makes him assume a past identity – this can force him to find his true self.
    Add a ticking clock by stating late-stage Alzheimer’s or end-of-life care.

    Hope you find this constructive, please forgive any bad translations, keep going!

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  3. Posted: November 1, 2021In: Thriller

    A young girl with amnesia is found on top of the highest mountain in Maine with blood-stained clothes, and the only one who can help her is the man who found her, a backwoods homesteader.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 2, 2021 at 6:39 am

    This is what I can glean: A blood-soaked young amnesiac is rescued from the peak of a mountain by a backwoods Maine homesteader. As you can see – interesting characters, but there’s a “thriller” gap. Now, if the homesteader was missing his wife and found this blood-soaked girl… Hope you find this coRead more

    This is what I can glean:
    A blood-soaked young amnesiac is rescued from the peak of a mountain by a backwoods Maine homesteader.

    As you can see – interesting characters, but there’s a “thriller” gap. Now, if the homesteader was missing his wife and found this blood-soaked girl…

    Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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