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A Self centered rising young artist must put aside his ego when he is forced to compete against his on and off girlfriend, for a record deal with a famous rapper’s upcoming label.
This is what I can glean: “An egotistical young musician must face off against his off-and-on girlfriend [aka better half] in order to win the record deal of famous rapper” The girlfriend's character is interesting but one-dimensional, what if she was anti-establishment, spiteful, or impoverished –Read more
This is what I can glean:
“An egotistical young musician must face off against his off-and-on girlfriend [aka better half] in order to win the record deal of famous rapper”
The girlfriend’s character is interesting but one-dimensional, what if she was anti-establishment, spiteful, or impoverished – you get the idea.
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See lessA prostitute finds herself in a futuristic world of cyborgs with four other girls.
Great start, but what is their goal, and who or what is stopping them from achieving it? Check out Blade Runner 2049 for research.
Great start, but what is their goal, and who or what is stopping them from achieving it?
Check out Blade Runner 2049 for research.
See lessMembers of an elite surveillance team are being murdered one by one as they relentlessly track down the brutal killers of a young trainee.
Consider the following: A worldbuilder may help. What was the mission that sparked the retaliation of these brutal killers? What’s the goal of your baddies? The logline reads like a “and then there was one” concerning the showdown. Seize the reader’s attention! Hope you find this constructive, takeRead more
Consider the following:
A worldbuilder may help.
What was the mission that sparked the retaliation of these brutal killers?
What’s the goal of your baddies?
The logline reads like a “and then there was one” concerning the showdown.
Seize the reader’s attention!
See lessHope you find this constructive, take care.