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Madrid, 2008. A cynical and disbelieving journalist of events, travels to Paris to investigate the death of the African model Katoucha Samrawitt, defender of the end of the ablation in her continent and related to certain political spheres. Determined to decipher if the death was a suicide, as the official version maintains, or a murder, he will have to face those who do not want the truth to come out.
“A cynical journalist investigating the presumed suicide of a top African model must [GOAL]” I am unable to envision why the model was killed, who the baddies are, and what the shocking truth will look like on-screen. Hope you find this constructive, keep going.
“A cynical journalist investigating the presumed suicide of a top African model must [GOAL]”
I am unable to envision why the model was killed, who the baddies are, and what the shocking truth will look like on-screen.
Hope you find this constructive, keep going.
See lessLogline . AD 2005 . Ajay. A young man dies in car accident but his girlfriend Maya survived. 25 years later Ajay would be brought back to life with futuristic technology . Will he find his ladylove and live happily ever after with their only love child?
Interesting take on a love story, consider the following: I started with this “Clinically dead for twenty-five years, a trust-fund baby is brought out of stasis only to discover ...” But your premise is not about him doing a job for the people who brought him back e.g., “Demolition Man” – it’s a lovRead more
Interesting take on a love story, consider the following:
I started with this “Clinically dead for twenty-five years, a trust-fund baby is brought out of stasis only to discover …” But your premise is not about him doing a job for the people who brought him back e.g., “Demolition Man” – it’s a love story after that, hmm.
How about:
“A once betrothed young man must rekindle a lost love in order to find his love-child-now-adult when awoke from a twenty-five-year stasis sleep”
Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
Fun fact: I will take a shot of whiskey for each hyphen used 😉
See lessWhile retaking Europe an allied soldier finds a book with invaluable secrets that lead him on a worldwide treasure hunt where powerful opponents will stop at nothing to have it all for themselves.
Examples: “When reclaiming the Nazi Camelot during WWII” “an allied soldier sets out on a worldwide treasure hunt” “an allied soldier finds himself up against a megalomaniac US general” “following clues from a looted ancient Dead Sea copper scroll” Baddie's goal: Nazis need the treasure to birth theRead more
Examples:
“When reclaiming the Nazi Camelot during WWII”
“an allied soldier sets out on a worldwide treasure hunt”
“an allied soldier finds himself up against a megalomaniac US general”
“following clues from a looted ancient Dead Sea copper scroll”
Baddie’s goal: Nazis need the treasure to birth the Fourth Reich.
This is your story, make these yours; hope you find these examples helpful.
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