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  1. Posted: October 6, 2021In: Comedy

    Before adopting a baby, Madhav and Adira adopts an old man to test and train themselves for parenthood and this so-called calculated risk turns out be their biggest nightmare.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on October 6, 2021 at 12:48 pm

    Fun! Leaning towards: “A baby fevered Indian couple lives are turned topsy-turvy when adopting a senior citizen to test the waters” I know “test the waters” is an American phrase, Google it – you’ll get the idea 😉. Make this yours, keep going!

    Fun! Leaning towards:
    “A baby fevered Indian couple lives are turned topsy-turvy when adopting a senior citizen to test the waters”

    I know “test the waters” is an American phrase, Google it – you’ll get the idea 😉.

    Make this yours, keep going!

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  2. Posted: September 30, 2021In: Drama

    Two introverts find love in the most unlikely place – Suicide.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on October 5, 2021 at 5:49 am

    As a reader, without your synopsis, I would have been lost. Start with your "neighbors" logline, then show not tell "takes it to another level". Once you have this, post it here for the community or me to provide feedback. Interesting start, keep going!

    As a reader, without your synopsis, I would have been lost. Start with your “neighbors” logline, then show not tell “takes it to another level”.

    Once you have this, post it here for the community or me to provide feedback.

    Interesting start, keep going!

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  3. Posted: September 29, 2021In: Drama

    A college football star’s dream of turning pro is jeopardized when he’s charged with the task of caring for his niece following his sister’s tragic death.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 30, 2021 at 8:52 am

    The gap for me is the word “charged” as it has negative legal connotations. Which raises the question, what’s stopping him from saying no? He is not legally bound to care. Example: “A top NFL draft pick career is jeopardized when taking in the mischievous niece of his deceased sister” Keep going!

    The gap for me is the word “charged” as it has negative legal connotations. Which raises the question, what’s stopping him from saying no? He is not legally bound to care.

    Example:
    “A top NFL draft pick career is jeopardized when taking in the mischievous niece of his deceased sister”

    Keep going!

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