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  1. Posted: September 28, 2021In: Comedy

    A young woman discovers she has an alter ego as a crime fighting superhero in a bunny costume.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 29, 2021 at 11:40 pm

    Sounds fun. Up the intrigue with a back story for this costume e.g., “… second-hand OR vintage bunny costume”. Who is this [before arc] young woman? E.g., “A cardboard bus driver ...” Take care.

    Sounds fun.

    Up the intrigue with a back story for this costume e.g., “… second-hand OR vintage bunny costume”.
    Who is this [before arc] young woman? E.g., “A cardboard bus driver …”

    Take care.

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  2. Posted: September 26, 2021In: Crime

    Interwined stories between an Russian immigrant, a brother and sister dealing with their abusive father, a drug dealer and a pimp in four tales of sex, drugs and murder in Brighton Beach, Brooklyn.

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    Added an answer on September 27, 2021 at 1:18 pm

    Missing the arc of these intertwined stories. Pulp Fiction: "The lives of two mob hitmen, a boxer, a gangster’s wife, and a pair of diner bandits intertwine in four tales of violence and redemption"

    Missing the arc of these intertwined stories.

    Pulp Fiction: “The lives of two mob hitmen, a boxer, a gangster’s wife, and a pair of diner bandits intertwine in four tales of violence and redemption”

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  3. Posted: September 25, 2021In: SciFi

    A young conscript wants to return to his ordinary life, but his newfound ability to perceive changes in the timeline caused by time traveling rebels he is put on the front line. He must use his ability to stop the attacks before they rip the space time continuum to shreds and destroy the world.

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    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 27, 2021 at 12:11 pm

    Consider the following: A young conscript (draftee) that already wants to retire. Find a word that describes his before arc state e.g., battle-weary. A conscript of what army or campaign? Curious, his abilities put him on the front line of what Sci-Fi-related war? What’s the goal of these time-traveRead more

    Consider the following:
    A young conscript (draftee) that already wants to retire. Find a word that describes his before arc state e.g., battle-weary.
    A conscript of what army or campaign? Curious, his abilities put him on the front line of what Sci-Fi-related war?
    What’s the goal of these time-traveling rebels?

    This is what I can glean:
    A conscript must use his precognitive abilities to stop time-traveling rebels from doing…

    Hope you find this constructive – keep going!

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