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  1. Posted: September 25, 2021In: SciFi

    A group of space travelers discover monsters in their plane and discover a woman who then gets killed and replaced by a robot replica.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 27, 2021 at 5:09 am

    "It's like... Snakes on a Plane - but in space!" I like it.

    “It’s like… Snakes on a Plane – but in space!” I like it.

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  2. Posted: September 20, 2021In: Adventure

    A presumed dead father explains to his son the connection between his dreams and heaven.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 27, 2021 at 4:38 am

    This is what I can glean: The son dreams of a dead dad, the father shows up in some form – then what? Armed with his info, what’s your protag’s journey [GOAL], and what/who is stopping him from accomplishing it?

    This is what I can glean:
    The son dreams of a dead dad, the father shows up in some form – then what? Armed with his info, what’s your protag’s journey [GOAL], and what/who is stopping him from accomplishing it?

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  3. Posted: September 20, 2021In: Drama

    Through the Devil’s envy, sin and death came into the world. Therefore, God sent his Son into the world so that through his death and resurrection, the world might be saved.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on September 27, 2021 at 4:12 am

    Well, the logline is a broad stroke of Biblical salvation which is difficult to envision on screen, try narrowing down your premise. Premise examples: Fall of man: Devil temps Eve, God must act by sending son. Thirty pieces of silver: Betrayed by one of twelve disciples (Judas), Jesus must act. TheRead more

    Well, the logline is a broad stroke of Biblical salvation which is difficult to envision on screen, try narrowing down your premise.

    Premise examples:
    Fall of man: Devil temps Eve, God must act by sending son.
    Thirty pieces of silver: Betrayed by one of twelve disciples (Judas), Jesus must act.
    The Second Coming of Christ: Worlds “Fallen”, Jesus must act.

    Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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