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Through the Devil’s envy, sin and death came into the world. Therefore, God sent his Son into the world so that through his death and resurrection, the world might be saved.
Amen brother. Click the "Formula" link in the header for examples on how to bring Presario2200 experience with John 3:16 into a logline :) Take care.
Amen brother. Click the “Formula” link in the header for examples on how to bring Presario2200 experience with John 3:16 into a logline 🙂
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See lessFerocious identical twins Reggie and Ronnie Kray are at the top of London’s criminal underworld. Stopping at nothing to maintain their dominance, establishing themselves as two of the most feared and respected gangsters in London’s history.
Consider the following: 1. Dig the ferocious duo protags. 2. A worldbuilder may help as this is a period piece. 3. Do they start at the top, fall, then return? 4. As a reader, I know the goal, but not the Major Event – call to action. 5. From your synopsis the opposition is a rival gang or a detectiRead more
Consider the following:
1. Dig the ferocious duo protags.
2. A worldbuilder may help as this is a period piece.
3. Do they start at the top, fall, then return?
4. As a reader, I know the goal, but not the Major Event – call to action.
5. From your synopsis the opposition is a rival gang or a detective, this is not referenced in the logline.
6. Click the Formula link in the header for help.
Hope you find this constructive, take care.
See lessWhen a dog of a dangerous breed is abandoned in front of Sofia, she decides to take her in, despite the colony of cats she has at home.
Consider the following: 1. Be specific with the breed to orientate the reader. 2. Who is Sofia? At the least "A young woman..." 3. The title is puzzling as adoption is a choice. She can just take the abandoned dog to the pound – end of story. Is there a long-term situation? Example: “A cat lady mustRead more
Consider the following:
1. Be specific with the breed to orientate the reader.
2. Who is Sofia? At the least “A young woman…”
3. The title is puzzling as adoption is a choice. She can just take the abandoned dog to the pound – end of story. Is there a long-term situation?
Example:
“A cat lady must [Action/GOAL] when [Major Event] e.g., stuck with an abandoned pit bull during a pandemic lockdown”
Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
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