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  1. Posted: September 12, 2021In: Comedy

    An anthology series about an different high school student and a different hitman swapping bodies.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 14, 2021 at 8:50 am

    Consider the following: 1. Find a solid student/hitmen connection. 2. Tell us they switch bodies. If unique tell us how; this can answer the Why Now. 3. Tell us what they must overcome to reach their goal. 4. Up the stakes by including a ticking clock. Hope you find this constructive, take care.

    Consider the following:
    1. Find a solid student/hitmen connection.
    2. Tell us they switch bodies. If unique tell us how; this can answer the Why Now.
    3. Tell us what they must overcome to reach their goal.
    4. Up the stakes by including a ticking clock.

    Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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  2. Posted: September 13, 2021In: Horror

    At a truck stop in Arkansas, a retired alcoholic cop turned paranormal investigator on a quest to reunite with his deceased son warns a brother and sister not to check into the Hardin Hill Bed and Breakfast.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 14, 2021 at 8:14 am

    Consider the following: 1. A head-scratcher is that his son’s spirit can appear “reunite” anywhere – why the B&B? 2. Is the B&B where a dark entity caused his son's death? 3. Why now? Is it the son’s deathiversary? 4. Optional hype: Who doesn’t like baddie nicknames in horror movies? Find soRead more

    Consider the following:
    1. A head-scratcher is that his son’s spirit can appear “reunite” anywhere – why the B&B?
    2. Is the B&B where a dark entity caused his son’s death?
    3. Why now? Is it the son’s deathiversary?
    4. Optional hype: Who doesn’t like baddie nicknames in horror movies? Find something you can build an urban legend around. A quick Arkansas baddie search talked about an infamous dude known as the “Deacon” – you get the idea.

    Example:
    “On the deathiversary of his son, a retired alcoholic cop turned paranormal investigator returns to [rural Arkansas B&B] in order to [GOAL] e.g., free his firstborn from a mischievous soul collecting entity [Optional hype] known as the Deacon”

    BTW: Years ago, I sent a horror logline off to “Hollywood” for their input and the one gem that came back was “deathiversary”. So, if you use this – you owe me a “40” of Community Mosaic IPA 😉 j/k.

    Keep going!

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  3. Posted: September 8, 2021In: Action

    Two con candidates who take down unethical companies gets hired by an retired entrepreneur on a revenge to bring his brother’s venture down

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 13, 2021 at 4:11 am

    What’s in it for them “takedown unethical companies” are they modern-day robin hoods? Example: “Two modern-day robin hoods must [GOAL] when [blackmail plot]” Keep going!

    What’s in it for them “takedown unethical companies” are they modern-day robin hoods?

    Example:
    “Two modern-day robin hoods must [GOAL] when [blackmail plot]”

    Keep going!

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