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  1. Posted: September 7, 2021In: Fantasy

    When a group of foster kids accidentally summon a demon, the friendly, helpful ghost who already haunted their foster home must drive out the demon to save both himself and the kids, without exorcising himself.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 9, 2021 at 2:17 am

    Dig it! Leaning towards: “When inadvertently summoning a demon on Halloween, a group of foster kids sets out on an exorcism mission with a resident friendly ghost to reclaim their beloved home” The “without exorcising himself” is also a good hook, although not in my version, it can be part of your ARead more

    Dig it!

    Leaning towards:
    “When inadvertently summoning a demon on Halloween, a group of foster kids sets out on an exorcism mission with a resident friendly ghost to reclaim their beloved home”

    The “without exorcising himself” is also a good hook, although not in my version, it can be part of your ACT II fodder.

    Keep going!

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2021In: Adventure

    When a little fish gets kidnapped by humans, it must break out of the aquarium and find back to its parents.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 9, 2021 at 12:28 am

    If Finding Nemo, use genre “Examples” to better orientate the reader.

    If Finding Nemo, use genre “Examples” to better orientate the reader.

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2021In: Thriller

    When his one-night stand turns out to be a dangerous psycho, a family man must fight in order to save the ones he loves..

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on September 9, 2021 at 12:07 am

    Normally there’s nothing but teasers from IMDb, but this Fatal Attraction logline is not bad: A married man's one-night stand comes back to haunt him when that lover begins to stalk him and his family. You can use this as a comparison to better hone our craft.

    Normally there’s nothing but teasers from IMDb, but this Fatal Attraction logline is not bad: A married man’s one-night stand comes back to haunt him when that lover begins to stalk him and his family.

    You can use this as a comparison to better hone our craft.

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