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A music teacher has a fatal accident, just as he was to achieve his dream of playing jazz professionally, and lands in the ‘Great Before’, from where he desperately tries to find his way back to his body.
Great movie. Concerning the logline, multiple comma usage is generally frowned upon. Try to reconstruct with no commas - would be a fun logline challenge.
Great movie. Concerning the logline, multiple comma usage is generally frowned upon. Try to reconstruct with no commas – would be a fun logline challenge.
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The “X number of words” is just an expression, meaning if you need 40 words in your logline to describe your movie - so be it. The Formula link (in the header) talks about logline structure/lengths – please reference. MasterClass.com also has a good explanation “How Many Words In a Standard Logline?Read more
The “X number of words” is just an expression, meaning if you need 40 words in your logline to describe your movie – so be it.
The Formula link (in the header) talks about logline structure/lengths – please reference. MasterClass.com also has a good explanation “How Many Words In a Standard Logline? Common industry practice dictates that loglines are only one sentence long. Some screenwriting gurus even cap loglines at 30 words. That said, an effective logline can be as long as a couple sentences, especially if it’s a complicated film.”
As for your other logline – I believe you’re getting there, I have given my input let’s see what others interject.
Take care.
See lessA anxious man must decrypt a disturbing, mysterious recurring dream that may hold the secret to preventing the end of the world.
Consider the following: 1. Why him? Who is this anxious protag that can save the world? 2. Why now - the dreams? 3. What is the recurring dream? E.g., death of the world via body snatchers, alien invasion – you get the idea. Elaborate on this to orientate the reader. 4. Think about your baddie's goaRead more
Consider the following:
1. Why him? Who is this anxious protag that can save the world?
2. Why now – the dreams?
3. What is the recurring dream? E.g., death of the world via body snatchers, alien invasion – you get the idea. Elaborate on this to orientate the reader.
4. Think about your baddie’s goal it may strengthen your logline E.g., revenge for the Roswell incident or like in Independence Day – planet harvesters.
Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
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