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After the lawyer’s aide is torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them, and must uncover their leader who order the hit in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.
Can always count on Mike for the good stuff, you’re getting there, consider the following: 1. Who is He – “he sues”? In the US, allegations/investigations of election fraud/police corruption have many players: high profile attorneys e.g., “Rudy Giuliani”, FBI, Attorney General, Justice Dept aka DOJRead more
Can always count on Mike for the good stuff, you’re getting there, consider the following:
1. Who is He – “he sues”? In the US, allegations/investigations of election fraud/police corruption have many players: high profile attorneys e.g., “Rudy Giuliani”, FBI, Attorney General, Justice Dept aka DOJ – you get the idea. So, what kind of lawyer is your protag?
2. Concerning “election fraud” are you referring to something local or presidential?
3. Change “After” to “When” meaning the aid is NOW testifying – that’s the trigger for your baddies to ice him.
Formula example:
“In the wake of a fraudulent presidential election, a high profile attorney must [do the ACTION/GOAL] when [a MAJOR EVENT occurs aka the slaying of his aid on or before testifying]”
Keep going!
See lessAfter a classmate dies while failing to control their emerging superpowers, a socially outcast high school student searches for answers and fights to keep her isolated Colorado town safe.
Consider the following: What is the superpower origin story? Who is this classmate to your outcast and what is their “answer” goal? Good location, who is the baddie he needs to stop? Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
Consider the following:
What is the superpower origin story?
Who is this classmate to your outcast and what is their “answer” goal?
Good location, who is the baddie he needs to stop?
Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
See lessCriminal investigator Darryl Blake groups with four detective trainees to gather evidence involving snuff video related crimes taken place at a university. While insisting ASPD student Matthew Efflick may be the culprit, almost little to no evidence can be found to prove it; all while he’s continuing his murderous pursuit.
Ideas: 1. “A recently transferred detective …” (fish out of water). 2. Does your detective have a flaw or quirk? There are many detective tropes, give us something unique. 3. Four detective trainees are a lot to keep up with, what about one trainee? 4. Nothing more frustrating than a detective withRead more
Ideas:
See less1. “A recently transferred detective …” (fish out of water).
2. Does your detective have a flaw or quirk? There are many detective tropes, give us something unique.
3. Four detective trainees are a lot to keep up with, what about one trainee?
4. Nothing more frustrating than a detective with blinders on – focused on the wrong suspect. Maybe the trainee alludes to this fact, so they should be the detective’s astute partner?
5. As a reader, I don’t immediately equate graphic snuff footage to the horror genre, as your premise follows a detective’s arc and is not solely focused on the snuff footage POV. In saying this, draw upon the psychological thriller concepts to strengthen your premise e.g., Se7en, 8mm, The Silence of the Lambs.