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  1. Posted: July 26, 2021In: Superhero

    The ambitious but reserved son of a dreamer discovers a hidden world of supers and joins the agency that keeps the secret, only to discover he has been in denial of his own, subtle superpower.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on July 27, 2021 at 5:04 am

    So, what is your reluctant hero’s goal? Beyond hero discovery and him getting absorbed into an agency – what does he bring to the table to make this premise unique? Who is your baddie and what is their goal? Hope you find this constructive, take care.

    So, what is your reluctant hero’s goal? Beyond hero discovery and him getting absorbed into an agency – what does he bring to the table to make this premise unique? Who is your baddie and what is their goal?

    Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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  2. Posted: July 23, 2021In: Family

    A suburban family must deal with raising children, neurotic relatives and the arrival of their Pacific Island adopted daughter’s biological uncle who believes culture is more important than family.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on July 24, 2021 at 9:24 am

    Leaning towards: “A liberal suburban family world is turned topsy-turvy when the adoption of their Pacific Islander daughter comes with a culturally hard-nosed uncle” Take care.

    Leaning towards:
    “A liberal suburban family world is turned topsy-turvy when the adoption of their Pacific Islander daughter comes with a culturally hard-nosed uncle”

    Take care.

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  3. Posted: June 24, 2021In: Crime

    After stealing money from what he believes is a small time gang, a former criminal (never caught) finds himself and his girlfriend being pursued by the men he stole from. With nowhere left to go, our protagonist is forced into working with the police to help track down what turns out to be a deadly criminal organization.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on June 27, 2021 at 8:50 am

    Examples: “A [debonair/proficient/career] criminal-turned-informant must [infiltrate/stop] a deadly criminal organization when stealing drug money from a supposed small-time gang” OR “On the run when stealing drug money …” We’ve all seen these informant tropes, find a unique angle for your premise tRead more

    Examples:
    “A [debonair/proficient/career] criminal-turned-informant must [infiltrate/stop] a deadly criminal organization when stealing drug money from a supposed small-time gang”
    OR
    “On the run when stealing drug money …”

    We’ve all seen these informant tropes, find a unique angle for your premise to add color to the logline.

    Keep going!

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