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A grieving father and his teenage daughter teams up with four other cadets to stop androids from invading Earth from an evil emperor.
Sounds cool, consider the following to strengthen your logline: 1. Why a father and daughter team to save the world? What’s makes them qualified? 2. You mentioned cadets, what kind of cadets are you referring to, and can your protag father being linked as their leader or teacher – hope you see whereRead more
Sounds cool, consider the following to strengthen your logline:
1. Why a father and daughter team to save the world? What’s makes them qualified?
2. You mentioned cadets, what kind of cadets are you referring to, and can your protag father being linked as their leader or teacher – hope you see where I’m going with this.
3. Who is your baddie (emperor) and what is his goal? Think about all the Sci-Fi shows we’ve seen, what makes this emperor and his minions unique?
Keep going!
See lessThe ambitious but reserved son of a dreamer discovers a hidden world of supers and joins the agency that keeps the secret, only to discover he has been in denial of his own, subtle superpower.
Cool, but who is he? e.g., is he an immigrant super endowed with ancient Aztec powers? Generally curious, and the logline can be refashioned around your super, with a goal of balance\finding their place in a world of shadow supers and supervillains.
Cool, but who is he? e.g., is he an immigrant super endowed with ancient Aztec powers? Generally curious, and the logline can be refashioned around your super, with a goal of balancefinding their place in a world of shadow supers and supervillains.
See lessA young boy is taken away from his father, His mom takes him across the country, and cuts off his relationship with his father. He gets raped by his mother, and he is trapped in the attic all by himself he must find a way to escape.
Consider the following: What is the psychology of this mother that forces her to kidnap her son? What’s her destination and goal? What must the father do to save his son? Take care.
Consider the following:
What is the psychology of this mother that forces her to kidnap her son? What’s her destination and goal? What must the father do to save his son?
Take care.
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