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  1. Posted: April 8, 2021In: Crime

    A young ex-offender wearing a GPS ankle monitor finds himself on the run from the criminal gang he betrayed and must make it home across the city before his 10pm curfew or risk being recalled to prison.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on April 10, 2021 at 12:46 am

    daleynixon could change "discovered" w/caught, rearrange the "When ..." this is just what I can glean. I trust the author will take these suggestions and make them their own.

    daleynixon could change “discovered” w/caught, rearrange the “When …” this is just what I can glean. I trust the author will take these suggestions and make them their own.

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  2. Posted: April 8, 2021In: Crime

    A young ex-offender wearing a GPS ankle monitor finds himself on the run from the criminal gang he betrayed and must make it home across the city before his 10pm curfew or risk being recalled to prison.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on April 10, 2021 at 12:40 am

    Curfew ankle monitors are a thang here in the states as well. Think about one of the more popular movies that featured ankle monitors e.g., 2018’s “Ant-Man and the Wasp” where Ant-Man is under house arrest via this device. This was one of the reasons that caused my re-read. Thus, I tried to reconstrRead more

    Curfew ankle monitors are a thang here in the states as well. Think about one of the more popular movies that featured ankle monitors e.g., 2018’s “Ant-Man and the Wasp” where Ant-Man is under house arrest via this device. This was one of the reasons that caused my re-read. Thus, I tried to reconstruct to enforce a curfew plot.

    Make this your own – keep going, would love to watch!

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  3. Posted: April 8, 2021In: Crime

    A young ex-offender wearing a GPS ankle monitor finds himself on the run from the criminal gang he betrayed and must make it home across the city before his 10pm curfew or risk being recalled to prison.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 8, 2021 at 2:21 am

    Dig it! Maybe I need more coffee but when reading “ankle monitor” I immediately jumped to - house arrest. Which made me do a double-take to read he was on the run in the city. Leaning towards: “An ankle monitored nark has three hours make it home before his 10 o’clock curfew when discovered by the iRead more

    Dig it!
    Maybe I need more coffee but when reading “ankle monitor” I immediately jumped to – house arrest. Which made me do a double-take to read he was on the run in the city.

    Leaning towards:
    “An ankle monitored nark has three hours make it home before his 10 o’clock curfew when discovered by the inner-city gang he betrayed.”

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