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A closed-off artist tries to leave her old life behind without attachments, when an anonymous one-night stand goes hilariously wrong and the protective wall around the painful memory, isolating her, begins to crack.
Your artist has issues, but I am unable to glean why she’s hurt – thus I cannot fully grasp her psychology. Why was this one-night stand hilarious? It reads like this one-nighter positively impacts her life, but I am unable to connect how this stranger helps her “tear down the wall”. BTW: An artist’Read more
Your artist has issues, but I am unable to glean why she’s hurt – thus I cannot fully grasp her psychology. Why was this one-night stand hilarious? It reads like this one-nighter positively impacts her life, but I am unable to connect how this stranger helps her “tear down the wall”.
BTW: An artist’s medium speaks volumes e.g. While bodypainting a nude model thing’s get hot – you get the idea.
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See lessA young woman successfully flees from her stalker ex-boyfriend but, after he kills himself and leaves her his sizable estate, she must decide whether to take the money and risk the wrath of the man’s surviving family, who believe the money is rightfully theirs.
Richiev has a point. That missing 'one extra thing' is due to this RL story being in ACT II, the outcome and fallout, if they take the money or not, is yet happened.
Richiev has a point. That missing ‘one extra thing’ is due to this RL story being in ACT II, the outcome and fallout, if they take the money or not, is yet happened.
See lessWhen Unegen meets a fellow shaman, Ghazan, at the gateway to Tam, another realm, he is gifted with a vision inducing sap. Forced to flee his tribe, Unegen finds Ghazan in the Omni Desert, where Unegen is tricked into taming a demon, that Ghazan uses as a disguise to smuggle himself past the gatekeeper, Yabash, and into Tam. Furious, the gatekeeper Yabash tasks Unegen with hunting down Ghazan.
Example logline is in the same vein as anime. Gaps: WHY is your protag forced to flee his tribe, WHY does this trickster need into another realm, WHAT is the goal? Think about these in order to strengthen your logline. Example: “A shaman hunter is awakened when the demonic tricks of a fugitive forceRead more
Example logline is in the same vein as anime.
Gaps: WHY is your protag forced to flee his tribe, WHY does this trickster need into another realm, WHAT is the goal? Think about these in order to strengthen your logline.
Example:
“A shaman hunter is awakened when the demonic tricks of a fugitive force him into the shadow realm to stop the theft of shapeshifting talisman.”
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