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  1. Posted: March 31, 2021In: Thriller

    Three characters, three life stories, integrate as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to imprison a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah. — WHOLE

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on April 1, 2021 at 2:21 am

    Nice, took a stab that these three life stories were victims and changed discover to catch. “A schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces of three victims in a quest to catch a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah.”

    Nice, took a stab that these three life stories were victims and changed discover to catch.
    “A schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces of three victims in a quest to catch a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah.”

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  2. Posted: January 30, 2021In: Drama

    In 1993, a frustrated editor-in-chief living a double life in a conservative, perfect-looking town, is struggling to find his truth. 

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on February 1, 2021 at 4:07 am

    Ok, assuming an LGBT angle. 1. Since this occurs in the past – added a world builder. 2. Upped the conflict by changing “living” to “struggles”. Make this your own: "Set in the ’90s at the tipping point of LGBT rights, a bisexual editor-in-chief struggles with his double life in a picturesque conserRead more

    Ok, assuming an LGBT angle.
    1. Since this occurs in the past – added a world builder.
    2. Upped the conflict by changing “living” to “struggles”.

    Make this your own:
    “Set in the ’90s at the tipping point of LGBT rights, a bisexual editor-in-chief struggles with his double life in a picturesque conservative town”

    Keep going, take care.

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  3. Posted: January 30, 2021In: SciFi

    LEGION OF ONE – When a rogue AI threatens to exterminate the world’s population, a gutsy cyber agent streams into the mind of a psychotic hacker to retrieve the shutdown code. Does this logline sound like a winner?

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on January 31, 2021 at 1:51 am

    Dig it! The logistics of a cyber (computer) agent accessing the human mind of the hacker caused me to do a double-take. It's not outside of the realm of possibility - I get he can do it virtually. Lean example: A cyberagent must infiltrate the mind of a psychotic hacker in order to shut down an AI tRead more

    Dig it!
    The logistics of a cyber (computer) agent accessing the human mind of the hacker caused me to do a double-take. It’s not outside of the realm of possibility – I get he can do it virtually.

    Lean example:
    A cyberagent must infiltrate the mind of a psychotic hacker in order to shut down an AI threatening humanity.

    Keep going, take care.

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