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The last married man on Earth takes on all contenders to win back his kidnapped wife on a bloody, gladiatorial game show.
Right! There are so many details to this world which contribute in small ways to the story, but which don't really take center stage. Without including them, it's hard for me to avoid confusion. The fact that they are the last married couple isn't really central to the story, but I've been reading aRead more
Right! There are so many details to this world which contribute in small ways to the story, but which don’t really take center stage. Without including them, it’s hard for me to avoid confusion.
The fact that they are the last married couple isn’t really central to the story, but I’ve been reading about the concept of “irony,” and was trying to include some.
Is there a better way of going about this? This is the first logline I’ve tried to write, and I’m tearing my hair out! Haha
See lessA newly wed gay couple wants nothing more than live a normal life in the gated community they've moved into, but their arrival leads to civil strife as the sexually repressed conservative leader of the homeowners association will stop at nothing to drive them out.
Great idea! It's hard to tell what genre this script will fall under; is it a serious social drama, or a lighthearted comedy? Try shortening a few phrases and using descriptive verbs: (Serious drama): A newlywed gay couple struggles to live peacefully in their new community, where the leader of theRead more
Great idea!
It’s hard to tell what genre this script will fall under; is it a serious social drama, or a lighthearted comedy? Try shortening a few phrases and using descriptive verbs:
(Serious drama): A newlywed gay couple struggles to live peacefully in their new community, where the leader of the homeowners’ association will stop at nothing to drive them away.
(Lighthearted comedy)
See lessSparks fly when a newlywed gay couple moves into a neighborhood governed by a strictly conservative homeowners’ association.
Bitten by a zombie then discarded by her protector, a timid woman struggling to survive learns there's more to the apocalypse and the man she trusted.
Interesting premise! One quick note: generally the phrase "more to the..." is followed by "than he ever knew" or something similar. The absence of the latter half throws the reader off. Try changing the phrase (you'll think of something better than this suggestion): Bitten by a zombie then discardedRead more
Interesting premise! One quick note: generally the phrase “more to the…” is followed by “than he ever knew” or something similar. The absence of the latter half throws the reader off. Try changing the phrase (you’ll think of something better than this suggestion): Bitten by a zombie then discarded by her protector, a timid woman struggling to survive learns a dark secret about the apocalypse and the man she trusted.
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