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After committing an atrocity, a true-believing champion of the Greek gods seeks redemption by hunting down a cunning, unchecked, voracious and pitiless enemy. But his quest leads him to uncover some cold truths about his masters. And the final choice he must make will shape humanity?s future for centuries to come.
The story sounds fascinating! However your logline could use a little polishing for clarity and brevity. Is this "true-believing champion of the Greek gods" a god himself, or a man? And by "champion," do you mean, "champion of a cause" or "champion of a contest"? Try shortening to one sentence: In tRead more
The story sounds fascinating! However your logline could use a little polishing for clarity and brevity. Is this “true-believing champion of the Greek gods” a god himself, or a man? And by “champion,” do you mean, “champion of a cause” or “champion of a contest”? Try shortening to one sentence: In the service of the Greek gods, a bold champion’s quest for redemption places in his hands a chilling secret about his masters, and the power to change humanity’s future for centuries to come.
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