1. Posted: June 6, 2013In:

    In order to avoid a lengthy prison sentence, a baobhan sith agrees to work with an anti-vampire organization whose sole mission is to protect citizens from things that go bump in the night.

    JBalmer Penpusher

    Hey guys I have a quick question. Do you include a major plot twist in the log line or something alluding to said twist? For example: To avoid ?death by daylight?, a notorious female vampire is forced to help the supernatural policing agency, that has been secretly experimenting on her, catch and arRead more

    Hey guys I have a quick question. Do you include a major plot twist in the log line or something alluding to said twist? For example:

    To avoid ?death by daylight?, a notorious female vampire is forced to help the supernatural policing agency, that has been secretly experimenting on her, catch and arrest vampires of her ilk and infamy.

    Do I keep the experimenting portion or is it better if they find out from the story?

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  2. Posted: June 6, 2013In:

    In order to avoid a lengthy prison sentence, a baobhan sith agrees to work with an anti-vampire organization whose sole mission is to protect citizens from things that go bump in the night.

    JBalmer Penpusher

    Thanks Richiev!

    Thanks Richiev!

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  3. Posted: June 6, 2013In:

    In order to avoid a lengthy prison sentence, a baobhan sith agrees to work with an anti-vampire organization whose sole mission is to protect citizens from things that go bump in the night.

    JBalmer Penpusher

    Thanks guys. So I was thinking that assist seems more active than help. Catching and arresting also implies more action than capture. As far as referring to the anti-vampire program as a supernatural policing agency, do you feel as though that heightens things? To avoid a death by daylight? sentenceRead more

    Thanks guys. So I was thinking that assist seems more active than help. Catching and arresting also implies more action than capture. As far as referring to the anti-vampire program as a supernatural policing agency, do you feel as though that heightens things?

    To avoid a death by daylight? sentence, a notorious female vampire must assist a supernatural policing agency in catching and arresting vampires of her ilk and infamy.

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