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  1. Posted: September 30, 2015In: Drama

    When a man born with a fox tail falls in love, he must overcome his insecurities about how he looks, to win his foxy lady.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Logliner
    Added an answer on October 13, 2015 at 2:43 am

    Hellow White Shadow, I would like his "foxy lady" being a real vixen. This could be a great tale about tolerance, the feeling of superiority... I like the idea of the hero disturbed by his human appearance when he falls in love with a vixen...

    Hellow White Shadow,

    I would like his “foxy lady” being a real vixen. This could be a great tale about tolerance, the feeling of superiority… I like the idea of the hero disturbed by his human appearance when he falls in love with a vixen…

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  2. Posted: September 30, 2015In: Drama

    When a man born with a fox tail falls in love, he must overcome his insecurities about how he looks, to win his foxy lady.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Logliner
    Added an answer on October 13, 2015 at 1:39 am

    Hellow White Shadow, I would like his "foxy lady" being a real vixen. This could be a great tale about tolerance, the feeling of superiority... I like the idea of the hero disturbed by his human appearance when he falls in love with a vixen...

    Hellow White Shadow,

    I would like his “foxy lady” being a real vixen. This could be a great tale about tolerance, the feeling of superiority… I like the idea of the hero disturbed by his human appearance when he falls in love with a vixen…

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  3. Posted: September 30, 2015In: Comedy

    when a dog savagely bites the hand of a colleague of a young vet; she must reattach it in order to save his life.

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    Added an answer on October 13, 2015 at 1:24 am

    Hello Wheelsonfire,Try this (22 words): "When a dog savagely bites the hand of a?colleague,?a young vet must reattach it in order to save his life."I agree with FFF. This seems very little to sustain a 90 minutes action/comedy movie. Hand bites are hardly ever lethal, and the tone suggests more a drRead more

    Hello Wheelsonfire,

    Try this (22 words):
    “When a dog savagely bites the hand of a?colleague,?a young vet must reattach it in order to save his life.”

    I agree with FFF. This seems very little to sustain a 90 minutes action/comedy movie. Hand bites are hardly ever lethal, and the tone suggests more a drama than a comedy…

    I assume that many funny things happen, the hand bite issue being mostly the inciting incident or the backdrop of the story. ?IMO, this is what is missing in your logline. It tells not enough about your story.

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