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When the passionate brother of the bland man she is engaged to marry falls madly in love with her, a woman must decide which man is right for her.
A?book keeper from Brooklyn finds herself in a difficult situation when she falls for the brother of the man she agreed to marry (IMDB, 24 words)
A?book keeper from Brooklyn finds herself in a difficult situation when she falls for the brother of the man she agreed to marry (IMDB, 24 words)
See lessWhen a young woman finds out she is a prototype for factory-made humans she needs to run away from her creators who has decided to erase her due to production errors.
Hello Stella, I assume that your logline is not about Ex Machina (Ava is not the prototype of an android series) and that your hero could be as well Rachael in Blade Runner than Ava in Ex Machina. IMO: - when discovering she's a prototype is a good inciting in cident, enough to make the story start.Read more
Hello Stella,
I assume that your logline is not about Ex Machina (Ava is not the prototype of an android series) and that your hero could be as well Rachael in Blade Runner than Ava in Ex Machina.
IMO:
– when discovering she’s a prototype is a good inciting in cident, enough to make the story start. She can learn about her fate later in the setup, and the reason why even later.
– “A young woman” is enough. No?need of more details about your hero as we also know the most important: she’s the prototype of?an android series.
– “production errors” is enough also.
Try something like this :
“When discovering she?s the prototype of an android line, a young woman must escape her creators who decided to erase her due to production defects.”
Best.
See lessWhen he is reunited with his first love, a man who has lived alone for 20 years has to learn to care about others so he won’t be dumped by her again.
Hello Stella, This is one of the most common subjects of novels and movies of every time, but I love it, and so many people do (the reason why this is one of ...). "When reunited with his first love, a surly grouch must learn to care about others not to be dumped again." :o)
Hello Stella,
This is one of the most common subjects of novels and movies of every time, but I love it, and so many people do (the reason why this is one of …).
“When reunited with his first love, a surly grouch must learn to care about others not to be dumped again.”
:o)
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