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  1. Posted: May 18, 2013In: Public

    A dynamic young woman (witness and rescuer) and a reporter of the National Geographic (safe passenger) meet on the scene of a train crash. Over the course of seven days, while the disaster consequences fade and despite the increasing hostility of her father, they grow closer up to a bond; then a lasting union while her father will be won over under pressure from her maid and confidante.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat
    Added an answer on May 20, 2013 at 7:29 pm

    Hi dpg, All I needed is in your answer. But as I cannot prevent myself from wanting the last word (please excuse me :-) ): Love cannot be the subjective goal I think, as love is never a goal but ever a cause. It answers to the question "why," not to the question "what". I think that his subjective gRead more

    Hi dpg,

    All I needed is in your answer.

    But as I cannot prevent myself from wanting the last word (please excuse me 🙂 ):

    Love cannot be the subjective goal I think, as love is never a goal but ever a cause. It answers to the question “why,” not to the question “what”.
    I think that his subjective goal is “feel happier doing what his love calls for”

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  2. Posted: May 18, 2013In: Public

    A dynamic young woman (witness and rescuer) and a reporter of the National Geographic (safe passenger) meet on the scene of a train crash. Over the course of seven days, while the disaster consequences fade and despite the increasing hostility of her father, they grow closer up to a bond; then a lasting union while her father will be won over under pressure from her maid and confidante.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat
    Added an answer on May 20, 2013 at 6:26 pm

    Hi Tony, Hi dpg, Hi RichieV, Back to basics, a saying with 30 words: "After she met the man of her life, a young dynamic orphan woman struggle to overcome the tyranny of her domineering widower father with the help of her substitute mother" The same with 27 words to please Allen Palmer: "After she mRead more

    Hi Tony,
    Hi dpg,
    Hi RichieV,

    Back to basics, a saying with 30 words:

    “After she met the man of her life, a young dynamic orphan woman struggle to overcome the tyranny of her domineering widower father with the help of her substitute mother”

    The same with 27 words to please Allen Palmer:

    “After she met the man of her life, a young woman struggle to overcome the tyranny of her domineering father with the help of her substitute mother”

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  3. Posted: May 18, 2013In: Public

    A dynamic young woman (witness and rescuer) and a reporter of the National Geographic (safe passenger) meet on the scene of a train crash. Over the course of seven days, while the disaster consequences fade and despite the increasing hostility of her father, they grow closer up to a bond; then a lasting union while her father will be won over under pressure from her maid and confidante.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat
    Added an answer on May 20, 2013 at 3:14 am

    Thanks dpg, This is very helpful because it decomposes the problem in simple and specific tidy things, easily definable and quantifiable. I already have the main answers but I reflect a little to clarify some points and add some others. I reply in a short while.

    Thanks dpg,

    This is very helpful because it decomposes the problem in simple and specific tidy things, easily definable and quantifiable.

    I already have the main answers but I reflect a little to clarify some points and add some others.

    I reply in a short while.

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