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  1. Posted: May 17, 2013In: Public

    (Comedy) After the death of his wife (Mell),the oldest outlaw in a notorious biker gang decides to convert his bandits into neighborhood watch members, Whilst his enemies raise the price on his head.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat
    Added an answer on May 20, 2013 at 12:50 am

    Hi Callum.S Visit http://www.moviebytes.com/ All you need is there. Good Luck

    Hi Callum.S

    Visit http://www.moviebytes.com/

    All you need is there.

    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: May 18, 2013In: Public

    A dynamic young woman (witness and rescuer) and a reporter of the National Geographic (safe passenger) meet on the scene of a train crash. Over the course of seven days, while the disaster consequences fade and despite the increasing hostility of her father, they grow closer up to a bond; then a lasting union while her father will be won over under pressure from her maid and confidante.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat
    Added an answer on May 20, 2013 at 12:43 am

    Thanks Tony Don?t worry and don?t feel guilty. You don?t drive me crazy: I already am. ;-) I give you $10 more to apologize. Alice is the only daughter of a very strong and domineering widower, and Zelda (the maid), is like a mother figure for Alice in their all minds. These are some of many major dRead more

    Thanks Tony

    Don?t worry and don?t feel guilty. You don?t drive me crazy: I already am. 😉
    I give you $10 more to apologize.

    Alice is the only daughter of a very strong and domineering widower, and Zelda (the maid), is like a mother figure for Alice in their all minds.

    These are some of many major details of the story. This draft is a winner of the 2012 Screenplay Festival and two producers are interested. That?s why I need a decent logline very quicly.

    Here is an extract of a dialogue between Phil and Alice :

    INT. ALICE?S CAR – DAY

    PHIL
    Do you work at the ranch?

    ALICE
    Part time. I help out with routine chores like any other employee. Daddy won?t let me do any kind of management or offer any idea.

    PHIL
    That?s too bad. You have a talent for this. Have you ever thought of getting married?

    ALICE
    Not in a long time. Daddy has always managed to get in the way of anything serious. He wouldn?t let me go to college either.
    In return, he spoils me as much as he can. That?s why I have my library, allowance, the freedom to do whatever I want with the club.
    I finally accept my comfortable life and relax in my gilded prison.

    (silence) …

    ALICE
    (humbly)
    This is not really better than what I said about my friends. I’m not as strong as what I’m trying to show in fact.

    PHIL
    You are a strong character dominated by another still louder and you try to bring to others part of what missed to you. There is nothing negative in that. You?ll find your freedom when you choose your own way.?

    I’m cooking something new for this damn logline. I’ll put it there a little later.

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  3. Posted: May 17, 2013In: Public

    (Comedy) After the death of his wife (Mell),the oldest outlaw in a notorious biker gang decides to convert his bandits into neighborhood watch members, Whilst his enemies raise the price on his head.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat
    Added an answer on May 19, 2013 at 10:48 pm

    I apologize dpg :-( , I meant "co-signed by CallumS, RichieV and dpg (who is a great psychanalist!)"

    I apologize dpg 🙁 , I meant “co-signed by CallumS, RichieV and dpg (who is a great psychanalist!)”

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