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A dynamic young woman (witness and rescuer) and a reporter of the National Geographic (safe passenger) meet on the scene of a train crash. Over the course of seven days, while the disaster consequences fade and despite the increasing hostility of her father, they grow closer up to a bond; then a lasting union while her father will be won over under pressure from her maid and confidante.
Thanks dpg, You're right again. The best is less than 250 characters.and 50 words What do you think about this please ? "A dynamic young rescuer woman meets a world known reporter on a train crash scene. Next days, as the disaster issue fades, they grow closer up to a bond then a lasting union whileRead more
Thanks dpg,
You’re right again. The best is less than 250 characters.and 50 words
What do you think about this please ?
“A dynamic young rescuer woman meets a world known reporter on a train crash scene. Next days, as the disaster issue fades, they grow closer up to a bond then a lasting union while her maid struggles to overcome the increasing hostility of her father”
(249 characters, 45 words)
And about this please ?
“Due to a train crash, Alice and Phil meet and fall in love; Benjamin discourages them, Zelda encourages: three people challenge each other resulting in new lives for all of them with the help of the fourth”
(205 characters, 37 words)
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Hi CallumS, This is a great idea for a great comedy. Seems to me that this story will be co-signed by CallumS and RichieV (who is a great psychanalist!) I don't know if we can speak of "logline" for a story wich is not written. A completed screenplay must have been writtten, and rewritten and rewritRead more
Hi CallumS,
This is a great idea for a great comedy.
Seems to me that this story will be co-signed by CallumS and RichieV (who is a great psychanalist!)
I don’t know if we can speak of “logline” for a story wich is not written. A completed screenplay must have been writtten, and rewritten and rewritten and rewritten … and rewritten once the premise (the plot idea), then the synopsis, then the chart of characters, then the treatment had been written (and sometimes rewritten). The logline is the last thing to write, I think, and I see that it is better to rewrite and rewrite it with your help.
I am a rookie here (I found this website yesterday), and I don’t speak english very well, but I realize that LOGLINE.IT is a very good laboratory to make the ideas spring, from the premise … to the logline!
Your idea is a great idea CallumS, and RichieV’s logline is a great logline. I wish i’ll read the first draft coming between the two in the coming months. This is your main goal. No matter if the final logline must be rewrote in accordance with the final story. A story wich is not written is not a story.
Good luck for this work!
See lessA dynamic young woman (witness and rescuer) and a reporter of the National Geographic (safe passenger) meet on the scene of a train crash. Over the course of seven days, while the disaster consequences fade and despite the increasing hostility of her father, they grow closer up to a bond; then a lasting union while her father will be won over under pressure from her maid and confidante.
Is it better like that ? A dynamic young woman (witness and rescuer) and a reporter of the National Geographic (safe passenger) meet on the scene of a train crash. Over the course of seven days, as the disaster consequences fade, they grow closer up to a bond then a lasting union while her maid andRead more
Is it better like that ?
A dynamic young woman (witness and rescuer) and a reporter of the National Geographic (safe passenger) meet on the scene of a train crash. Over the course of seven days, as the disaster consequences fade, they grow closer up to a bond then a lasting union while her maid and confidante struggles to overcome the increasing hostility of her father.
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