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A dynamic young woman (witness and rescuer) and a reporter of the National Geographic (safe passenger) meet on the scene of a train crash. Over the course of seven days, while the disaster consequences fade and despite the increasing hostility of her father, they grow closer up to a bond; then a lasting union while her father will be won over under pressure from her maid and confidante.
Thanks Rirchiev, You're right too dpg, thanks This is much better. I'll take it! And yes dpg, it is a romance! just one selected from among the best which had yet to be written.
Thanks Rirchiev,
You’re right too dpg, thanks
This is much better. I’ll take it!
And yes dpg, it is a romance!
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Due to a train crash, Alice and Phil meet and fall in love; Benjamin discourages, Zelda encourages: three people challenge each other resulting in new lives for all of them with the help of the fourth.
Hi, The length of your answers makes me think that it annoys you - or that you do not like being taken for guinea pigs - ;-) I put my logline compliant version into a new post (Alice Ashton 2). What do you think of it? Now I will look a little over YOUR loglines! :-) Kind regards
Hi,
The length of your answers makes me think that it annoys you – or that you do not like being taken for guinea pigs – 😉
I put my logline compliant version into a new post (Alice Ashton 2). What do you think of it?
Now I will look a little over YOUR loglines! 🙂
Kind regards
See lessDue to a train crash, Alice and Phil meet and fall in love; Benjamin discourages, Zelda encourages: three people challenge each other resulting in new lives for all of them with the help of the fourth.
Is this better please ? (not too long?) "Due to a train crash, Alice and Phil meet and fall in love; Benjamin discourages, Zelda encourages. Over the course of seven days, this disaster will allow the protagonists to meet, to grow to appreciate one another, and to reveal their underrated qualities:Read more
Is this better please ? (not too long?)
“Due to a train crash, Alice and Phil meet and fall in love; Benjamin discourages, Zelda encourages. Over the course of seven days, this disaster will allow the protagonists to meet, to grow to appreciate one another, and to reveal their underrated qualities: three people challenge each other resulting in new lives for all of them with the help of the fourth.”
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