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  1. Posted: April 20, 2018In: Fantasy

    When planetary gods disagree on each other’s decisions of “universal laws”, An Earth God engages in a divine war against the biased laws for his claim in the new world

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    Jessie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 20, 2018 at 10:43 pm

    I am picturing epic battles with large armies of god-underlings. But I may be wrong. Would like a brief description of what a divine war looks like, too. Currently?imagining a?war-movie with added superpowers.

    I am picturing epic battles with large armies of god-underlings. But I may be wrong. Would like a brief description of what a divine war looks like, too. Currently?imagining a?war-movie with added superpowers.

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  2. Posted: April 20, 2018In: SciFi

    Revised2: Upon learning their time-line has been sabotaged, an insecure, scatterbrained time-travel expert must win the faith of her cranky husband and her team, in time to save her wrongfully terminated project and their marriage.

    Jessie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 20, 2018 at 1:48 am

    Hi! Thanks! It?s actually for a fan fiction audio drama, script is well received by fellow geeks. Episode 1/4 is currently in post, but I thought I?d test run the logline, before I give it to our visual artist. And yep, there?s indeed a good dose of comedy there too. Therefore, I dodged being a relaRead more

    Hi! Thanks! It?s actually for a fan fiction audio drama, script is well received by fellow geeks. Episode 1/4 is currently in post, but I thought I?d test run the logline, before I give it to our visual artist. And yep, there?s indeed a good dose of comedy there too.

    Therefore, I dodged being a relative and such on purpose and their relationship in the marriage is well, complicated. Hostile would be more clear cut. I guess he?s maybe mainly condescending/overprotective, a bit full of himself/happy to argue at the worst possible moment lol. More of a hands on person, rather freaked out by her scatterbrain trait. It seems to work in the story, but is tough to logline for me. Plus he?s the narrator. (I know, it shouldn?t work, but it seems to)

    Hmmm. Can you think of keeping in the risk of their action and the time travel component?

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  3. Posted: April 19, 2018In: SciFi

    After losing his captcha, a tone deaf scientist must prove himself human in a music duel, or slave his life in an AI camp

    Jessie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 20, 2018 at 12:20 am

    For what it?s worth I like the combo of tone deaf and music duel. How relevant is him being a scientist?

    For what it?s worth I like the combo of tone deaf and music duel. How relevant is him being a scientist?

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