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When a businessman sells up to recover from debilitating injury, he embarks on an apparently simple quest to trace the origin of a family heirloom.
Hi Russel! Just go back to formula. The incident in something that happens to the character. So, the injury? So more clearly, the need to pay a steep medical bill? Character: a businessman. You could give us a juicy character flaw, here. Action: ascertain value Maybe something like: When he can?t afRead more
Hi Russel!
Just go back to formula. The incident in something that happens to the character. So, the injury? So more clearly, the need to pay a steep medical bill?
Character: a businessman. You could give us a juicy character flaw, here.
Action: ascertain value
Maybe something like:
When he can?t afford a medical bill, a loner (?) businessman must connect with his outrageous relatives to prove the origin of a valuable family heirloom.
Obviously, replace my suggestions, with what makes sense for your story. 🙂
See lessAfter accidentally reviving a teenage MUMMY, a young archaeologist must fight the freed DARK FORCES who want the MUMMY to turn evil and cause annihilation.
I think you've got the basics covered. I don't know what the rules on capitalization are. Feels like something best avoided to me. But better wait for someone more experienced for that. Here's a suggestion: After accidentally reviving a?benign?teenage mummy and?dark forces bent on annihilation by coRead more
I think you’ve got the basics covered. I don’t know what the rules on capitalization are. Feels like something best avoided to me. But better wait for someone more experienced for that.
Here’s a suggestion:
After accidentally reviving a?benign?teenage mummy and?dark forces bent on annihilation by converting it,? an inexperienced?archaeologist?must protect his new friend.
I suggested inexperience for young , because it could be a nice obstacle for him, if you like it. I also assumed most of the fighting is in protection of the mummy and threw in a relationship.
See lessA family – who are part of the same cult – discover that they must sacrifice themselves in order to enter the afterlife. But when Blake – the open-minded son – begins to suspect that there is no such thing, he must try to convince his brainwashed family to save themselves from their upcoming suicide. TITLE: Live to Die
Quick note. Don't use actual character names. :)
Quick note. Don’t use actual character names. 🙂
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