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  1. Posted: April 6, 2020In: Horror

    After killing its progeny as part of an initiation hunting family ritual, a man and his teenage son must protect themselves from a horrid beast that hunts in the dark and feeds upon human skin.

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    Added an answer on April 7, 2020 at 9:49 am

    Thank you both for your reviews. The main character is the teenager - at least the film is told on his point of view. I had the same dilemma about the beginning of the logline. That's why I chose the words "its", as it is referring to the beast. But I guess I'll go with a beginning as suggested by RRead more

    Thank you both for your reviews.

    The main character is the teenager – at least the film is told on his point of view.

    I had the same dilemma about the beginning of the logline. That’s why I chose the words “its”, as it is referring to the beast. But I guess I’ll go with a beginning as suggested by Richiev. It’s more straightforward.

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  2. Posted: April 2, 2020In: Western

    When his former lover is killed, an immortal cowboy rises from the dead teams up with a teenage girl to kill those are responsible.

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    Added an answer on April 6, 2020 at 10:54 am

    If he's immortal maybe he's facing a gang of outlaw ghost bandits? Like someone said above, being immortal leaves him with no adversaries. Unless they are immortal too. Also, what about the teenage girl he teams up with? Why she would join him? Or maybe she has a special power - sees dead people, foRead more

    If he’s immortal maybe he’s facing a gang of outlaw ghost bandits? Like someone said above, being immortal leaves him with no adversaries. Unless they are immortal too.

    Also, what about the teenage girl he teams up with? Why she would join him? Or maybe she has a special power – sees dead people, for instance.

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  3. Posted: November 15, 2019In: Horror

    When his family is terrorised by the ghost of a killer, a man sets out to confront the ghost, an old foe, bent on avenging his death.

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    Added an answer on April 6, 2020 at 7:08 am

    I like this one. Reminds me of 'Cape Fear' but with a ghost twist. Also 'Shocker', that Wes Craven's 80's B-movie about a serial killer's spirit using electric power to kill. I imagine being a ghost gives the killer a couple of advantages (invisibility, teleportation, and so on). I'd like to see whaRead more

    I like this one. Reminds me of ‘Cape Fear’ but with a ghost twist. Also ‘Shocker’, that Wes Craven’s 80’s B-movie about a serial killer’s spirit using electric power to kill.

    I imagine being a ghost gives the killer a couple of advantages (invisibility, teleportation, and so on). I’d like to see what kind of things the family man would do to stop him.

    But is the ghost only looking for vengeance? Maybe the family man did something horrible to him and kept it in secret. That would put him in jeopardy with his family also. I don’t know, maybe the ghost was a business associate and got betrayed and killed by the family man to get his share of the company. I think the lead character’s contradiction would add depth to him and the story as a whole.

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