1. Posted: April 15, 2012In:

    As a series of devastating terrorist attacks are waged on American soil and the citizens of a nation in shock looks to their Government for reassurance, word publicly gets out that one of the embedded terrorists is negotiating a defection directly with the President's wife in return for the violence to stop.

    joey

    Thanks for both your comments. This script is only outlined at this stage. Your advice helps to take a clearer run at this. -Joey

    Thanks for both your comments. This script is only outlined at this stage. Your advice helps to take a clearer run at this.
    -Joey

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  2. Posted: April 15, 2012In:

    When a man's visions of a lover from a past life reveal she may also be alive today, his initial curiosity turns to an all-consuming obsession as he attempts to challenge fate to be with her once again.

    joey

    It's in the vein of reincarnation, but the driving forcing of the story is in his attempts to find a woman that everyone else believes "doesn't exist" (for obvious reasons). -Joey

    It’s in the vein of reincarnation, but the driving forcing of the story is in his attempts to find a woman that everyone else believes “doesn’t exist” (for obvious reasons).
    -Joey

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  3. Posted: April 15, 2012In:

    When a famous Italian detective investigates the death of the daughter he didn\'t know he had, he uncovers more than just murder in this small, immigrant, upstate New York town.

    joey

    I like this. My gut originally was telling me it's too wordy after first read, but the core of the story is strong without little detail - just the way it should be. -Joey

    I like this. My gut originally was telling me it’s too wordy after first read, but the core of the story is strong without little detail – just the way it should be.
    -Joey

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