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Rosie, a successful businesswoman, finds herself floundering in the search for her one true love. When a handsome stranger comes into her life she must decide if she?s ready to settle down, or if there?s more to life than white picket fences.
If Rosie's desire is to find true love then there is something missing in the log line that presents a reason for her to question if finding that person is what she truly wants. Just as an example - if she has to give up a job she loves or she doesn't want kids and he has one - then she has to learnRead more
If Rosie’s desire is to find true love then there is something missing in the log line that presents a reason for her to question if finding that person is what she truly wants. Just as an example – if she has to give up a job she loves or she doesn’t want kids and he has one – then she has to learn to live with it or something that changes her expectations of what “true love” is or can be.
See lessWhen a self conscious Bunny is fired from his job and kicked out of the North Pole by Santa Claus, he then leaves in search of a way to create his own magical day, until the pressure of making a holiday becomes too much.
I like the idea of the bunny wanting his own holiday, but if this is for kids you might reconsider the portrayal of Santa as a person who would fire an insecure, presumably cute and relatable bunny. I'd look deeper into ideas about the bunny's motivation and reasoning for creating his own holiday.
I like the idea of the bunny wanting his own holiday, but if this is for kids you might reconsider the portrayal of Santa as a person who would fire an insecure, presumably cute and relatable bunny. I’d look deeper into ideas about the bunny’s motivation and reasoning for creating his own holiday.
See lessSwashbuckling adventure of Alan as he breaks out of jails and leads a wandering lifestyle until he meets the love of his life which changes his life and leads him to be a detective.
Consider a more focused approach, who is he and why is Alan swashbuckling? What world is he in that swashbucklers become detectives? "love of his life, which changes his life" is a bit clunky. You might consider more vibrant language when describing the love of his life. Maybe consider presenting aRead more
Consider a more focused approach, who is he and why is Alan swashbuckling? What world is he in that swashbucklers become detectives? “love of his life, which changes his life” is a bit clunky. You might consider more vibrant language when describing the love of his life. Maybe consider presenting a conflict, as an example – the love of his life is also the same person trying to put him back jail.
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