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  1. Posted: May 8, 2015In: Public

    When her only daughter intends to get married within a month, 50 yrs old widow Neela, who has deep fear of loneliness, must become aware of this fear by stop denying it and then try to face and overcome this fear by accepting the truth that we are all alone so that she can give consent to her daughter's marriage.

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    Added an answer on May 13, 2015 at 1:13 am

    sorry my bad. forgot to mention that i'm from india. n here we still have the concept of joint family. so many children stay with their parents even after their marriage. also english is not my 1st language so i'm not able to articulate it properly. but here the issue is not about the mother's conseRead more

    sorry my bad. forgot to mention that i’m from india. n here we still have the concept of joint family. so many children stay with their parents even after their marriage. also english is not my 1st language so i’m not able to articulate it properly. but here the issue is not about the mother’s consent. mother will give her consent anyways but she’s just not ready to face this inevitable situation. as they both love each other so much. n even daughter understands this. n that is why even she wants to handle this situation delicately. as she cares for her mom so much n also worried for her. so in this context, the stakes are high. but maybe people in U.S won’t be able to relate to this situation at all.

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  2. Posted: May 11, 2015In: Public

    Set in contemporary Japan, an American expatriate finds employment as a bartender at a residential hotel only to discover that it doubles as the base of operations for a major Yakuza syndicate.

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    Added an answer on May 11, 2015 at 4:57 pm

    see what I'm not getting is that I thought this was perfect..

    see what I’m not getting is that I thought this was perfect..

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  3. Posted: May 11, 2015In: Public

    Recently hired as a lounge bartender, an American expatriate is unceremoniously thrust into the no-holds-barred criminal underworld of Japan when he discovers that the residential hotel he works in is controlled by a major crime syndicate. Now moonlighting as a Yakuza enforcer, the expatriate must deal with violent lieutenants, manipulative allies, corrupt officials and seductive women all while trying to solve the murder of an old acquaintance.

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    Added an answer on May 11, 2015 at 4:50 pm

    I am wondering if the logline needs to address why he is an expatriate. Why would he want to become an enforcer? Are they responsable for the friends death? Is he trying to take the organization down from within? I'm just trying to understand what one has to do with the other.

    I am wondering if the logline needs to address why he is an expatriate. Why would he want to become an enforcer? Are they responsable for the friends death? Is he trying to take the organization down from within? I’m just trying to understand what one has to do with the other.

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