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A brash missionary and a local gang must set aside their feud and defend their village against a violent drug cartel.
Thanks Steven... that's an interesting direction you've taken - one I haven't considered. I'd always understood loglines to be a kind of a practical description of the story ("cut the bull son, and just tell me what it's about"), but your suggestion is obviously much more evocative. I like it.
Thanks Steven… that’s an interesting direction you’ve taken – one I haven’t considered. I’d always understood loglines to be a kind of a practical description of the story (“cut the bull son, and just tell me what it’s about”), but your suggestion is obviously much more evocative. I like it.
See lessWith an entire school held captive, a doctor must relive a traumatic childhood that may solve the mystery behind the sadistic madman that threatens his daughter's life.
I like the general concept, but I'd agree with the others here in that 'relive a traumatic childhood' feels vague, and slightly passive. It's difficult without knowing the entire story, but does this help? "When his daughter's entire school is held captive by a sadistic madman, a doctor realizes thaRead more
I like the general concept, but I’d agree with the others here in that ‘relive a traumatic childhood’ feels vague, and slightly passive. It’s difficult without knowing the entire story, but does this help?
“When his daughter’s entire school is held captive by a sadistic madman, a doctor realizes that this is no random event, and that the key to their survival lies deep within his own traumatic childhood.”
See lessA brash missionary and a local gang must set aside their feud and defend their village against a violent drug cartel.
Hey Lucius - thanks for the comment. I hadn't considered adding the source of the conflict before, so that's an interesting note. How about something along these lines: "When a brash missionary and his young family reopen a long abandoned church, it starts to threaten the dominance of a local gang,Read more
Hey Lucius – thanks for the comment. I hadn’t considered adding the source of the conflict before, so that’s an interesting note. How about something along these lines:
“When a brash missionary and his young family reopen a long abandoned church, it starts to threaten the dominance of a local gang, but when the gang take their revenge, they unwittingly provoke a violent drug cartel hellbent on making an example of the whole village.”
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