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A military bioweapons collector attempts to cover-up an accidental release of a deadly, new strain of flu by destroying the project’s hard drive before his Russian counterpart can prove the CIA’s involvement.
yes there are actually covert bioweapons collectors who collect the deadliest strains 'not to be used as weapons, but to be researched for cures in case bioterrorists exploit them as bioweapons'. The story is about the accidental (and possible) creation of a novel lineage of flu that targets and kilRead more
yes there are actually covert bioweapons collectors who collect the deadliest strains ‘not to be used as weapons, but to be researched for cures in case bioterrorists exploit them as bioweapons’. The story is about the accidental (and possible) creation of a novel lineage of flu that targets and kills kids. The cure is quickly discovered but has to be implemented quickly on an island in quarantine. The real issue is the covert project’s hard drive contains data showing the US illegal involvement with bioweapons research and my protagonist has to recover the hard drive before the Russians. I decided to use this logline instead. Please let me know how it reads:
After the accidental release of a deadly flu virus, a military bioweapons collector races against his Russian counterpart to retrieve a hard drive with sensitive data about the CIA?s involvement.
See lessAt the Battle of Pyramids, when Napoleon cannons the face of the Sphinx, its stirred resident demon begins a journey of invisible revenge on his troops one by one until it finds him in his lonely island prison
Name the demon and make it the protagonist possibly "demon name" is awoken by Napoleon's cannons desecrating it's crypt.? go with silently instead of invisible unless it is truly UNSEEN and are you talking about Napoleons exile, I wasn't sure
Name the demon and make it the protagonist possibly “demon name” is awoken by Napoleon’s cannons desecrating it’s crypt.? go with silently instead of invisible unless it is truly UNSEEN and are you talking about Napoleons exile, I wasn’t sure
See lessBLOODLUST When a peace-loving Hindu man witnesses his brother and girlfriend murdered in a convenience store robbery it triggers one of his past lives as an 8th Century Norse Berserker. Now he must fight to control the bloodlust before it destroys him and more innocent lives.
Use Hindi not Hindu man, you already use 'his' so we know it is a male. Lose itemizing who died and perhaps say 'something like the? murder of those he loved' forget the convenience store too, seems a bit stereotypical finding a a Hindi there. Go with 'past memories' instead of lives
Use Hindi not Hindu man, you already use ‘his’ so we know it is a male. Lose itemizing who died and perhaps say ‘something like the? murder of those he loved’ forget the convenience store too, seems a bit stereotypical finding a a Hindi there. Go with ‘past memories’ instead of lives
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