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  1. Posted: March 24, 2017In: Action

    A military bioweapons collector attempts to cover-up an accidental release of a deadly, new strain of flu by destroying the project’s hard drive before his Russian counterpart can prove the CIA’s involvement.

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    Added an answer on March 25, 2017 at 3:09 am

    I really do appreciate your input and interest. It means my concept intrigues you and you are trying to help me present it in a way more palatable for the general public. The valid points you raise I actually address ?in my story. ?I use CIA because that is what the public thinks it should be but acRead more

    I really do appreciate your input and interest. It means my concept intrigues you and you are trying to help me present it in a way more palatable for the general public. The valid points you raise I actually address ?in my story. ?I use CIA because that is what the public thinks it should be but actually it is USAMRIID that handles biologicals and I create a fictional covert group few know that I call CBOB (Congressional Biological Oversight Bureau) . As far as saving lives, that is the focus initially, kids are dying and my character is the one who discovers it doing his job and also locks down the island with HIMSELF also being trapped. I take care of the kids and infection issue about half way through the novel, then he switches to saving his own ass and those with him, he has to negotiate with the head of the Russian team who is actually his friend and the Russians are under the Minister of Health for Russia who is the Russian Team leader’s ?sister and also my characters former (possibly still) lover. Deals have to be cut and the Russians know they need to contain the outbreak and treat the sick but they also have a responsibility to collect specimens to help with future outbreaks. The problem is the conditions demanded by the islands leader would also cost the life of their American friend. There are lots of decisions and intrigue and I don’t wish to ruin it for you but if you care to actually read what I have competed of the second draft here is a link: heck I would love input since I am writing a novel with damn little input from others:?https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fddIi33tBZdQRPNPRaxzg-a7sGbtG5dkvYWrb_MxFiA/edit?usp=sharing

    feel free to offer any suggestions, I have an editor friend who does and also a librarian and another novelist, I won’t turn down input and generally actually use it

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  2. Posted: March 24, 2017In: Action

    A military bioweapons collector attempts to cover-up an accidental release of a deadly, new strain of flu by destroying the project’s hard drive before his Russian counterpart can prove the CIA’s involvement.

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    Added an answer on March 25, 2017 at 1:48 am

    i appreciate the comments but have to ask you ?if Chris Kyle or Ed Snowden are heroes? They both did things that helped their Nation is some eyes while hurting it in others. The outbreak is just another job to my 'hero' but he also is a patriot and knows releasing classified info to the Russians wilRead more

    i appreciate the comments but have to ask you ?if Chris Kyle or Ed Snowden are heroes? They both did things that helped their Nation is some eyes while hurting it in others. The outbreak is just another job to my ‘hero’ but he also is a patriot and knows releasing classified info to the Russians will hurt not only the CIA but also could impede projects that actually do provide cures against bioweapons. He takes the ‘long view’ of his job very seriously. Why can James Bond kill people barely involved with his mission and show no remorse? Why would the government use a psychopath like Hannibal Lecter to help them solve a case? Sometimes bad men can be used to do good for society. My character isn’t bad, he is simply amoral. He didn’t mean to set a virus free but the project sure let it happen. If you think this story is BS, I suggest you research the real events it is based upon. The 1976 outbreak of swine flu may have been an escaped virus or a mutated one in a vaccine. And the ‘Russian flu’ the following year WAS an accidental (or possibly intentional in retaliation) ?release just as describe in my story:?http://mbio.asm.org/content/6/4/e01013-15.full

    My novel is more of a fictionalized version of real events and here is a link to show you that what I am describing actually happened and if you care to read more than a logline here is my current iteration of my ?query:?http://agentqueryconnect.com/index.php?/topic/36908-viral-some-things-are-best-left-dead/

    I debated having my story classified as horror for this reason. Yes, the government does this type of research and I am a former molecular biologist ?who worked with viruses and also ex military. The problem is most of the public is clueless about our American Bioweapons program. I won’t make a hero of my main character but there are plenty of others for the reader to relate with.

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  3. Posted: March 24, 2017In: Action

    A military bioweapons collector attempts to cover-up an accidental release of a deadly, new strain of flu by destroying the project’s hard drive before his Russian counterpart can prove the CIA’s involvement.

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    Added an answer on March 25, 2017 at 12:44 am

    actually the pandemic is a secondary issue in this story, what is really important is the cover-up. I have my team manage to find a cure using available technology, the problem is getting it onto the island. The islands dictator won't allow the biohazard team to enter unless they turn over my CollecRead more

    actually the pandemic is a secondary issue in this story, what is really important is the cover-up. I have my team manage to find a cure using available technology, the problem is getting it onto the island. The islands dictator won’t allow the biohazard team to enter unless they turn over my Collector, ?who he thinks did the outbreak to assassinate him. Hard to prove they didn’t since it is CIA backed. The Russians have to decide, turn over her former lover to a madman who plans to kill him in exchange for allowing her team access to the island to treat the outbreak, or something else. My Collector goes with something else and I won’t reveal anymore. it really is a dance with lots of twists, including my ‘hero’ isn’t any better than his Russian counterpart

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