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  1. Posted: August 22, 2014In: Public

    Blue collar forty something finds time in his harried day to be a loving husband, caring father, dependable son, mob enforcer, and a violent sadistic killer all while masking his true identity.

    keithrafalko
    Added an answer on August 23, 2014 at 7:40 am

    I wish my other projects didnt have legs because the agency approved this and not all the others. Sorry just could not give out as much info as people would like.

    I wish my other projects didnt have legs because the agency approved this and not all the others. Sorry just could not give out as much info as people would like.

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  2. Posted: August 22, 2014In: Public

    Blue collar forty something finds time in his harried day to be a loving husband, caring father, dependable son, mob enforcer, and a violent sadistic killer all while masking his true identity.

    keithrafalko
    Added an answer on August 23, 2014 at 7:40 am

    I wish my other projects didnt have legs because the agency approved this and not all the others. Sorry just could not give out as much info as people would like.

    I wish my other projects didnt have legs because the agency approved this and not all the others. Sorry just could not give out as much info as people would like.

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  3. Posted: August 22, 2014In: Public

    Blue collar forty something finds time in his harried day to be a loving husband, caring father, dependable son, mob enforcer, and a violent sadistic killer all while masking his true identity.

    keithrafalko
    Added an answer on August 23, 2014 at 7:36 am

    Thanks everyone. The FBI does not work or able to tie in. No back story in pilot at all, it is all about the arc. Our agent and manager approved of the pilot and the series and are excited, just missing out on the logline right now so they can submit. I have researched the CIA very well, apparentlyRead more

    Thanks everyone. The FBI does not work or able to tie in. No back story in pilot at all, it is all about the arc. Our agent and manager approved of the pilot and the series and are excited, just missing out on the logline right now so they can submit. I have researched the CIA very well, apparently not many have since the mob and CIA been in cahoots for years and this is lightly based off a true story. If WME agent approves I know we have something, just not able to give out every detail to the storylines. I truly do appreciate all your feedback and truly have and do take it all into consideration. I knew our logline was way off and I was burned out on it so decided to take a shot here as I am very glad I did because all your input has truly helped and I am grateful for all of you as well as this site.

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